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An Emptiness Inside

~An Emptiness Inside~ Right now I'm sitting here Staring into space Feeling so all alone As tears begin to fill my eyes And I begin to cry My heart suddenly feels an emptiness inside That here lately I just cannot hide If only you were here to hold me, I'd feel so protected... With you by my side My world feels so sad and blue Feeling as though I'm forever going to lose you Our love I thought was forever true? You told me just the other night That I was only a simple friend I then began to believe that our relationship Was only just pretend I've pleaded with you to help make This relationship of ours last Baby, I beg of you... Let's not dwell on the past I'm so sorry if I have hurt you But never forget my love for you Was always true Baby, I pray that I can Mend your broken heart But for now I will continue to look forward Day by day Pray continually... That we never, ever drift apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/20/2013 8:11:00 PM
This poem was a gentle ride through both sides of relationship.....your words are so tender they must be sincere and genuine....one of the nicest poems I have read in awhile.
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Karla Deal
Date: 9/21/2013 8:09:00 AM
Well thank you Wayne for your kind words of my poem. That means a lot. Have a GREAT weekend!! :) Karla~
Date: 9/1/2013 6:39:00 AM
How often that plead goes out to the ones we truly love. Your words are beautiful. I like it Karla.
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Date: 8/28/2013 2:07:00 PM
This is surely a beautiful write! I am glad that I came to read your work today! Thank you for sharing this tremendous poem! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Karla Deal
Date: 8/28/2013 2:12:00 PM
Awwww...thank you Russell, or may I call you Russ? Your kind words regarding my poem put a smile on my face. :) Thank you SO MUCH!!! Karla~

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