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An Emotion In Motion - a Triplet

She stands vulnerable, confident and excited Delicate hands, arms deliberately sided A soft etching to art and beauty enlivened and lusted. My love for her is quite stormy Like dark drifting clouds of agony As her windswept hair lashes my effrontery. The water falls from the eyes crazy And blinds me to her beauty Dragged down by a heart heavy. The heart in a sad sea of terrible tears It makes my conscience shivers And finally disappears +++++++ March 17, 2014 Form: Triplet - a short form not available on PS Fourth Place Win Contest: Heart And Soul by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/26/2014 9:08:00 AM
Enjyed reading your work this morn..Congrats on your win..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats.Sara
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Date: 3/24/2014 3:04:00 AM
Your lovely poem is filled with deep emotion and poignancy. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:15:00 PM
A strong poem, congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:18:00 PM
Dr Ram, . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:00:00 AM
lyrically quilled, dr.ram.. sweet congrats on your win!.. huggs
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:57:00 AM
Hi Ram, Many congrats on your heartfelt poem. A worthy win. Regards Theresaxx
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Date: 3/18/2014 10:15:00 PM
Dr. , you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2014 7:11:00 PM
Congrats Dr Ram on your win. A well written poem......Roger
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:27:00 AM
Enjoyed the way those line were constructed. 'The heart in a sad sea of terrible tears'. Nice write.
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