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An Embarrassing Habit

He'd always chased the girls, back in the day An embarrassing habit on display Like his old pop He couldn't stop Because of what's in his genes, they would say!

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Dean Wood

Date: 5/20/2019 9:50:00 AM

Very witty Pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 5/22/2019 2:38:00 PM

Glad you liked it Dean!...............Pat

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/18/2019 11:54:00 PM

G'day Pat ... your wit lights up a lazy sunday arvo - great - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 5/22/2019 2:38:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay!................80)

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/15/2019 3:10:00 PM

That is utterly one of the best limericks--mines ugh!--I have read so far, fantastic indeed Pat, Aloha wk

Pat Adams
Date: 5/17/2019 2:21:00 PM

Well thank you William, I certainly appreciate that!!!.....80)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2019 7:30:00 PM

Wow! He needs to stop playing with his genes! :0

Pat Adams
Date: 5/14/2019 7:34:00 AM

Absolutely! ...........80)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2019 3:49:00 PM

oh such clever word play Pat lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 5/14/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Jan!!!......80)