An Elegy

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2nd placement

abab rhyme pattern

11 syllables each line

written 14/07/2024

Constance La France

Elegy E form contest

 

In the silence of shadows over the lea, where daisies journey unhindered all around, is buried a sweetheart that dearly loved me, stop by me in contemplation, make no sound! Who can ever bring back loved ones who are gone? what gesture or move can turn back marching time? happiness, laughter and all the cheer when born, are now replaced by rings of sepulchral chime. I stay on and on till long shadows creep in, what place is good for me when my heart is here? hopes have dried out and my life’s purpose is thin, I live on lost thoughts and some dreams that bring cheer! Sleep, dear love, sleep on peacefully for ever, let not my sorrow hold you to this domain, sweetheart, we shall meet under heaven’s bower, I shall ride times chariot, love to regain! Death is reality of each life there is, every bright candle meets darkness in the end, beyond the mourning there is promise of bliss, to loved ones in God’s heaven, our prayers we send.

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:38:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/7/2024 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Constance! Happy you like my write! a wonderful contest with some great poems! Honoured!:)
Date: 7/23/2024 6:50:00 PM
"Sleep, dear love, sleep on peacefully for ever, let not my sorrow hold you to this domain, sweetheart, we shall meet under heaven’s bower" optimistically nostalgic poem. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/23/2024 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Very Much Christuraj! always a pleasure to hear from you!:)
Date: 7/23/2024 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "An Elegy" write. Great memories are the best kind to have. Great Ending..... Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/23/2024 10:02:00 AM
Dear Paula, Thanks very much! A loss is such a pain. Elegies are some of the saddest in literature!
Date: 7/21/2024 2:19:00 AM
a heartfelt song filled with sensitive images...beautifully sad, Kris!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/21/2024 4:49:00 AM
Thanks Dear Nette! We all have to go through these moments of loss!! Indeed, every cemetery is a tale that echoes in many hearts!;(
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