An Ebony Night

Feeling smug about its certainty, night anticipates the day's demise. And as scattered clouds of grey gather; blue finds sanctuary in your eyes. As twilight colors a stained-glass sky, a scarlet sun reluctantly sinks. And dusk dilutes the essence of light, scribbling silhouettes in blackened inks. Vermilion tints the far horizon, as flashing fireflies light up the night. And nature inks magical moments; choreographing their dance with light. Darkness descends like a shroud of smoke, snuffing out the last lingering light. And in the fabric of time and space; stars confetti an ebony night. A golden moon shines down from above; gilding ripples in a wishing well. And silence mutes the beat of two hearts held captive, in love's hypnotic spell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Daniel Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 2:23 AM
Lovely poem resplendent with images, Emile, congratulations:)
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Thanks, Joanna; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Back your congrats, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate all you do my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful, Emile. Particularly love "As crimson flames melt a stained-glass sky Sol's scarlet orb reluctantly sinks." and your closing line.
Pinet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Das Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 9:56 AM
You weave a spell with words. Beautiful...
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Thanks so much Nandita, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Lindley Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:57 PM
GREAT POEM. Just saw it won POTD. CONGRATS. Images , flow and messages are all tops. A7..
Pinet Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Shuaib Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 8:58 PM
NICE!!!!!!!!!! Amazing rhyme scheme!!
Pinet Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 4:46 PM
Congratulations my friend on this excellent offering. So rich with imagery....cheers
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Stoner Jr Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Look at you Emile! Poem of the Day , your out there just tearing it up my friend. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Kourkoulis Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day! I love your word usage here. "Vermillion tints the horizon"! Just beautiful.
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Thomas, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Haight Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Such wonderful imagery through your words that flow so beautifully, Emile. A heartfelt congratulations on it being featured as Poem of the Day! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Thank you so much Sandra, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Cervenka Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:10 PM
You already Know I loved the poem. Congrats on POTD! This one earned it! Kudos, ~Jan
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Thanks so much Janet, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Congrats on being poem of the day..I enjoyed reading this one today.It is very descriptive work with good rhyme and rhythm.Sara
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thanks so much Sara, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Emile.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 12:00 PM
I'm so happy to see your beautiful poem featured as TPOD, Emile. Big congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda, I appreciate it. Emile.
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:47 AM
And I also have certainly added this beauty to my fav list and have given a 7+++ Have a most lovely day my friend.
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Thanks once more Kimberly, I'm in your debt. Emile.
Shaw Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Emile, my sincere congratulations for having this exquisite write being honored as POTD. I am in love with these romantic, heart melting words. You have a deep, romantic soul with a golden pen! Warm hugs, Kimberly
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Ah Kimberly, you have made me blush, thank you. Emile.
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:02 AM
The imagery is wonderfully written to the mind to visualize like always, your talent outstanding. Congratulations on Poem of the Day dear friend and a 7 very well deserved
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Thank you so much Eve, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Yvonne Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:52 AM
As I often do...I Congratulate the powers that be for choosing this as Poem Of The Day. What a treat for all of us poets reading this exquisite piece.
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Thanks again Maurice, you honor me. Emile.
Yvonne Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Wow, Emile this is just a gorgeous poem. A Fav!
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much Maurice, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Romaine Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Hey Emile, BIG congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen as POTD! This is a lovely tribute not only to the beauty of Night but also to the blessing of love. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Thank you very much Neva, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Nance Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 7:48 AM
So many great lines ~ that is how I like my poetry descriptive and enchanting. Nicely done! Grats on poem of the day!
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Thank you so much Casarah, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 7:43 AM
passionate and with such beautiful imagery Emile so lovely to see this honoured as poem of the day - a 7 from me this is truly beautiful:-) Hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Jan, as always your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Shumba Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Just brilliant,nice stuff
Petersen Potter Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Powerful pen Emile! Very beautiful piece you've painted us here, dear friend. Superb imagery! I truly enjoyed it. A 7 from me! Thanks for sharing! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Thanks Dorian, I always appreciate your support and kind words. Emile.
Ali Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:06 AM
How wonderfully you describe the sunset and the night.....'stars confetti an ebony night...these words will stay for a long time in my mind.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Thank you so much, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 8:31 PM
The passion and beauty of your imagery is mesmerizing, Emile! Wow...a liquid moon pools in a black sky...I could fave this poem for that line alone...hugs, Rhonda
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda, I appreciate all your visits. Emile.
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