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An Earth Rises To Its Star
Per fortuitous sun, befalls in a hard sky, burst kissed bluing off, seeds of tried gain calm, turn pummels to squander, and set a fast pace to change, to a sedate sensation, influence, the awakening elements of earth's variable forces, components all, in its wake of contributary spoiling of its world.
2020 March 14

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Date: 3/28/2020 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful William. I admire your poetic talent and skill in Gif. Blessing.
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Date: 3/28/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thank you my dutiful, Anisha, for your kind share -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 3/15/2020 11:01:00 PM
beautiful, William, it is going to be hard to compare... Great example. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/15/2020 11:30:00 PM
I sense another masterpiece is waiting to betold, Eve, -- Aloha!~@wk

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