An Early Mother's Day

I had much to accomplish last Saturday,
But far too many  things got in my way:

As always when awaking, I  took a pee,
then went to see the emails piled up for me.
I stayed so long, missed boxing class, so then,
I grabbed some food and went downstairs again!

Decided I’d swim laps at 12 instead.
Felt tired, so I lay down on my bed.
Put the TV on; dozed off. Oh my!
Woke up at noon, so skipped the swim (sigh!)

Told myself I’d later use the gym.
Then called my hubbie - talked a bit to him.
Called a sister too and talked forever.
Thought about the gym. I’d get there never!

Decided to do lesson plans and got my book.
Went to the computer, but at Soup I took a look!
Saw some blogs and got involved in those.
Got up to pet the dog and blow my nose.

Remembered I had vacuuming to do
But had to write a poem that was brand new.
Decided that the vacuuming could wait.
Took a bath and readied for  my mother/daughter date.

Put on better clothes and got to thinking
lesson plans and gym were off (my heart was sinking).
Happy nonetheless, I drove my car.
Went to my sweet daughter’s house; it’s not too far.

Drove an hour more in pouring rain
just to eat at Maid-rites once again!
Satisfied and chatting, headed south.
Taste of Maid-rites lingered in my mouth.

Arrived in Sandy for a film called Child 44.
Resisted smell of popcorn and the urge to eat once more.
Got home late. The dog was filled with glee.
I let him in the house as he jumped all over me.

My lovely weekend’s nearly gone. What fun. . .
when vacuuming and lesson plans are still not done!


(A list poem written for Sara Kendrick's "What I Accomplished Today" Poetry contest on the following day, Mother’s Day,when I actually finally did the vacuuming and my lesson plans! Nothing like putting things off till the last minute!)
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Babcock Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Just sometimes things can wait.Read this one before and a fine poem it is. love phyl
Price Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations! I really like the way you did this. Such fun
La France Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Andrea, oh this is delightful, your days seem a lot like mine, I mean well but so distracted and if I get on the soup, I am done, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beauty and thanks so much for visiting my poem, I have a story to tell, that poem is so meaningful to me, I am happy that it placed well in not one contest but two!!!
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Andrea:) Congratulations, on your sweet win. Love LINDA
Callus Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Back with congratulations, Andrea:)
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Unique entry..Congrats on your win..Sara
Merryman Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 8:21 PM
I have many days where I have a list of things I want to accomplish in a day, only to get sidetracked by things like poetry soup, facebook and reading a good book. Enjoyed your poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Andrea, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on your win, to a very busy day. Hugs eve
Das Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on top win. Loved this list.
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 2:26 AM
G'day Andrea... sounds like one of my days Andrea. I live by the motto 'why do today what can be left for tomorrow' - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Devnath  Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 4:32 PM
A beautiful list. Very expressive. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Onclaud Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 1:58 PM
yeow..I like those unaccomplished goals especially when all we need to do is relax.. a lively, superb artpiece, andie.. huggs
Posey Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Hey there! Hope you made the winners circle.... It's great to be back online. I'm posting new material occasionally now. My Mothers Day offering was "Let Me Be Your Friend"... I think I posted it earlier... Still Love Ya Much...... Jake
Neels Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Andrea, I am doing good thanks and you?
Neels Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Hectic day Andrea, even if you didn't get everything done, you sure did loads of other stuff ;) all the best for the contest busy lady ;) luv Wilma
Anish Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:31 PM
I do not do lesson plans - although my late father always did. I found this to be an enjoyable read! I sent more poems to the NY Times - I was glad to have a poem in there as it is a prestigious paper. Why not hire a housekeeper? That is what I do! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:38 PM
oh matt, you make me laugh. I can't even afford health insurance. My school does not give it and it's much too expensive for me to afford it. I surely can't hire a housekeeper!!
Hamilton Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 6:00 PM
lol sounds frenzied Andrea never put off what you can do today is most mother's laments hugs gl in contest 7
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Well done, a typical day mixed with a little humor has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page. Emile.
Walker Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Oh, I see that you did do the housework from the note below. You are so funny.
Walker Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Fun knowing that this really happened and you can make a poem out of your life. Eating Maid-rites makes me jealous and those that have never had this deliciousness are missing out. The cheese-rites so good and a tenderloin, no one knows what you are even talking about. Great job sis on the poem not on not doing the housework.
Callus Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:14 AM
You accomplished a lot without doing what was on the agenda! Not bad:) Of course, you're not the only one like this; eventually most things get done. // paul
Austin Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 9:56 AM
"Getting to know you, getting to know all about you." From The King and I, right? I love the song and I love knowing you. Love, daver
Nunez Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Charming and fun read, Andie. It was actually a nice day...haha. You got to do something for yourself, which is a rare case for moms! Loved it. GL in the contest. 7. Kim
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