An Early Experiment

The mirror reflects, obliquely,
a peculiar yellow butterfly -- it flutters, flutters
the specks of black my beard is made of
on the breeze.  A daffodil hangs down its treasure
and I spread shaving cream, in great white puffs,
shielding from the windy noise its yellow
across my face.  The nose protrudes, ridiculous
excrescence.  A leaf half green sweeps up in circles
in the whiteness all around.  A weak chin, think I,
of windy sighs.  Squirrels crack acorns, crunching,
down into a patchy neck.  Very unsatisfactory
remembering winter's almost famine.  The trees --
appearance.  Altogether so.  Oh well.
Quiet.  Steady.  Sturdy.  Oh well.
The mirror reflects, but not uniquely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 13, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Hi Leo: Great Poem! Two parallel universes blending into one.
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April 13, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Hi Leo: Great tPoem! Two parallel universes blending into one.
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April 13, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Well done. Very visual and charismatic
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