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Don't you dare whisper a warm breath on my shoulder, Or I might become even yet more, steamy and bolder! Here~on this intoxicating, Western, autumnal night. I wish I were, I wish I might, be your amorous slave tonight! Like a scented, rainbowed candle, joyfully melting into you. Becoming not one rainbowed glorious person, but a divine two. A destined, waxing puddle of the most ardent, joyous lovers. We are autmn’s blessed ones, under moonlit,sweet cloud-covers. Oh, how divinely close, under the caring eyes of the stars,we are, Sparkling in the velvet darkness, like bright jewels from planet,Mars! 9/20/2024 @ Panagiota Romios

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Date: 9/27/2024 3:52:00 AM
Glad I paid you a visit this morning, Pangie; this poem has been a pleasure to read. Passion and romantic thoughts flow with natural ease and sincerity. Yep...it definitely deserves a FAV!! ~ Warm regards , my friend // paul
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Date: 9/27/2024 4:55:00 AM
Sir Paul! I haven’been around much so two Faves makes my day, you are the second,)) Lawless was the first. I dont know about telepathy, but realized, yesterday,, I have not read you for sometime, then just like magic, here you are. Love ved your analysis of my attempt to create one awesome, summer night, and thank you, for the FAV! Warm hugs,Pangie xxx
Date: 9/21/2024 7:08:00 PM
O, you 'scented rainbow candle,' you! Methinks you are too amorous for me. Seriously, this is lovely!! ~ Amos --- Amorous' brother
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Date: 9/23/2024 12:58:00 AM
I wanted to clarify that JOHN LAWLESS was the first commenter on the verry bottom of all comments and he Faved it))), G~~I know you know that!! But with all our fooling around with silly names, wanted my message, loud and clear. Pangie?
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Date: 9/21/2024 7:20:00 PM
Thats me alright., Amos Johns comment andFave is at the bottom of this page. He wasthe first commenter at 6:11 am. Thanks. Rainbow Candle Pangie.
Date: 9/21/2024 5:32:00 PM
Lovely, romantic poetry Pangie, beautiful picture, beautiful words… Beryl
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Date: 9/21/2024 5:39:00 PM
Greetings, Beryl! Thank you for enkoying this as much as I had penning thisM Hugs, Pangie
Date: 9/21/2024 4:30:00 PM
Wonderfully done, pangie, and John Lawless sure loved this one!
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Date: 9/22/2024 12:52:00 PM
Wow so Roger wrote limericks too. How awesome. You are so lucky to have known him
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Date: 9/21/2024 4:40:00 PM
Hello one of my earliest friends here. Do you know it’s funny Andrea that every time I think of Roger, I think of you how about that? You both love movies and you both wrote poetry.. I didn’t know that Roger was an excellent at limericks. And he won the highest writing prize ever. I was watching midnight cowboy and I thought of how he and I argued over that movie. In a good way I mean.. Yes John Lawless liked it. I am so glad he saved it. That was a big one for me. And I’m glad that you liked it too… I hope your scratch is better by the way. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 9/21/2024 3:30:00 PM
Delightfully sensuous and compelling Pangie! Your rhyming is terrific and your passion pours through your words. :)
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Date: 9/21/2024 4:35:00 PM
Hi dearest linda, I was writing to a dear friend of ours about this whole rhyming thing. And thanks to my mother who read to me when I was very young a lot of poetry rhyming poetry, which is in my opinion the best poetry.. because we have learned bad in our mothers room. And it is very soothing compared to other poetry in my opinion. I learned so many old songs in the old days that were beautiful and rhyming. Can you remember free first if you write it and sing it ! No. But Melody, very similar to poetry. You can sing all the time and you’ll remember it. You won’t remember free verse.. Most of us come from an English culture verbiage. hi Chris for me are difficult. I can’t make them beautiful no matter no how hard I try..the music that is passion never left me. Thank you.Pangie xx
Date: 9/21/2024 3:29:00 PM
A romantic poem on this Indian Summer day. A creative vision by a wonderful poet.
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Date: 9/21/2024 4:29:00 PM
Elena! You know I am most pleased, wonderful poet! Long ago I gave up wanting to win poetry like it was a marathon. Because I am just not good at that and I don’t enjoy it.. other people do and I understand that. Poetry to me learning to write something. Beautiful or very expressive even if other people don’t like it.. life is sweetness and light. Sometimes there are times that we all have experienced, and there is no reason not to express that.. if we don’t read it then don’t! How simple can it be?. Let each part express themselves the way they do. that’s what I do. That’s what I enjoy. I do not need 100 friends. I cannot read 100 people a day.. there are other things to do that life puts upon us.Thank you for brightening my day .hugs, Pangie.xx
Date: 9/21/2024 11:32:00 AM
Spectacular verse, Pangie. The passion of your words are beautifully expressed! Bob
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Date: 9/21/2024 11:54:00 AM
Golly, Bob! Thank you for so saying. I love individuality in comments. I do not favor rushed through comments. They are so plastic. I think the Road Runner wrote some of them..meep, meep. LoL. They make me feel flat as a pancake. There is no life in them.just hot air)) but you are not like that. You are Bob, with a heart. Hugs, Pangie xxx
Date: 9/21/2024 10:20:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I just read this poem. it is passionate I felt the romance in this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Date: 9/21/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing, Darlene… glad you felt so much. Jhn Lawless FAVED it. He was the first commenter. Thank you, Pangiexxx hugs
Date: 9/21/2024 9:32:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful Rhyme write with a great/pretty picture. Yes, love/autumn nights are a wonderful sight. Have a very blessed day..................
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Date: 9/21/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Paula! This is quite a passionate poem.i am far from an intellectually skilled poet. I am not an intellectual in life.,, and I don’t talk that way either. I like my poetry to be clear and understandable to all.. and I appreciate those who have skill to write with concepts, and the larger vocabulary. But I was influenced a lot from my favorite poet cummings! You should read his poem “ I Like my body, when it is your body”.. that piem is a classic! I like in your poetry that you express how you feel or you express how fictional character is. You’re really good at that.. Hugs, Pangie xxx
Date: 9/21/2024 9:11:00 AM
Dear John, I am so moved by your wonderful comment. I’m sorry I have to answer above it so please make sure that you see it.. you describe it perfectly in your powerful words. my heart will be dancing all day..moved by your Fave….WOW Hugs and kisses kisses, Pangie.xx…
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Date: 9/21/2024 6:11:00 AM
A FAVE....pure passion enfolded in Fall moonlight, with a whisper of wonder. ..."a destined, waxing puddle"...love this one Pangie
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