An Autumn Scene

The autumn sun shines through the near naked trees exposing recent abandoned thrush nests
those months before were hidden from Mans eyes. The lingering colored, crisp, dying leaves
precariously cling until late November winds and rain end their brief lives leaving only
their scented remains on the ground.


A scorpion sun shines through near naked
Trees exposing vacant, forsaken nests
Where blue robin eggs laid comfortable hid
From probing Mans eyes and unwelcome guests.
The lingering, colored, crisp, dying leaves
Cling to the branches precariously
Until the blustering wind starts to heave
Its gusts from the north unrelentingly. 
Apropos of rain it soon will follow
Deluging hapless, defenseless brown leafs.
The wind and the rain display a grand show
Dislodging the leaves whose lives were so brief.
After the lull of the wind and the rain
What’re left on the ground are scented remains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/6/2009 10:26:00 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Albert. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2009 10:28:00 AM
Breath taking images....This is a wonderful poem of autumn! I really loved this! :) Carrie
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Date: 11/5/2009 8:52:00 AM
A nice window to the rare and short scenery you allowed to see with beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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