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An Autumn Leaf's Prayer

Am I the heartbeat of the crimson leaf?
Can my pulsating blood in nature be
the freedom of a summer's coming grief,

or is my fate ordained in verdant see
the mired death of all untrue belief
upon the altar of concrete decree

wherein I end as alder's unborn child
within this autumn park's constructed wild?

I pray I am the spawning of the earth
upon which only giants place their feet
and as I germ within the gaping dearth

where looms the winter's unforsaking sleet
I'll breed continuance of summer's mirth
upon the prancing of my golden feet.

I feel the scarlet burning in my veins
and ask the arbor gospel flame remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Delaney Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations..a beautiful prayer to an Autumn leaf. Glad to read your words today. SuZ
Cozart Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Thanks, Suzanne.
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much, Line.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:11 PM
This one has an Old English flavor to it..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..If this is for a contest reads like a good contender to me..Sara
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Cresswell Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Amazing quilt of words tenderly sewn into this poem. I will put this into my treasure box. Thank you
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Thanks so much, Patricia, for your compliments.
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Another lovely poem among the beautiful creations I have seen lately--lovely scenic theme--well crafted and delivered!
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Thanks very much, Vijay!
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 3:38 AM
I love how you divided your ottava rima in two tercets and a couplet! And how you used autumn as a metaphor. Great poem.
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, Darren!
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