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An audience in the overhanging trees glean upon the sight darkening light appease. Free spirit blotting out the sun shortly ease; dancing image in the shady shadow seize. Glean upon the sight darkening light appease; nesting birds departing and upward release. Dancing image in the shady shadow seize. with the assist of teasing most fickle breeze. Nesting birds departing and upward release reaching out to touch the outspread wings ~ shall please, with the assist of teasing most fickle breeze. as they cry breaking the angst silence unease. Reaching out to touch the outspread wings ~ shall please, free spirit blotting out the sun shortly ease; as they cry breaking the angst silence unease an audience in the overhanging trees. 12/19/2019 resubmitted poem on 10/17/2020 A Monorhyme Pantoum An Audience, was inspired by the birds that are always singing day and night in the tree in front of my bedroom window. It is written in a Pantoum form using all same sound rhyming words called Monorhyme. The name of my book is called Rhapsody of Poems Copyright 2020 An Audience is found on page 90 in the book. Front Cover is an oil painting called “Tea Party” painted by me in 2014. My daughter-in-law modeled for the painting. I dedicated the book to my loving husband that passed on August 29, 2018. The book contains a variety of short stories and poems, in the forms of Free Verse, Rhyme, Abecedarian, Quatrain, and others.

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Date: 11/25/2020 10:57:00 AM
Well, Eve, you're not only good with words, you're a pretty good artist too--and I should know as I can't draw a straight line! Congrats
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Date: 11/24/2020 4:26:00 AM
Eve,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
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Date: 11/24/2020 4:01:00 AM
Lovely write, dear Eve. I enjoyed this so much and Congrats on your win in Line's contest. This is amazing!!! God bless you
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Date: 11/24/2020 3:40:00 AM
Eve. congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:20:00 AM
Excellent piece.. I love how you have woven the monorhyme ...Congratulations dear Eve.
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Date: 10/18/2020 6:31:00 AM
I love a pantoum and you did this so well, I can see you were inspired..
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Date: 10/18/2020 6:25:00 AM
Monorhyme and pantoum together is a tough form, but you have done an excellent job here, Eve:) congratulations on your new book:)
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Date: 10/18/2020 4:54:00 AM
Wonderful tone and flow inspired by your audience--I enjoyed the read. Congrats on your new book, Eve.
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Date: 10/17/2020 10:39:00 PM
Wishing you good luck with the published book, it is easy to see that your are a master of the pantoun. Perfectly done. ~~
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