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An Attempt

20 February 2010 An Attempt By: Noel N. Villarosa I thought I will never propel on -------------------------------------- THIS But perseverance jocundly push me to join what they called------- IS HGarvey and Dane Ann new poetry is some ------------------------ WHAT Meticulous and métier that never ------------------------------------- I’VE Done before, but my mind hardly ------------------------------------ TRIED Squeezing concepts to form what is needed ------------------------- TO Satisfy the judge and outflank competitors on ---------------------- THIS But I am sure everything must --------------------------------------- END Not with a period but in a single -------------------------------------- LINE Of congratulations to all who joined this contest of End line ------- WORD

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Jay Loveless

Date: 6/1/2010 11:15:00 AM

Nice job (:

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2010 4:06:00 AM

Great idea for the competition. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

David Byrne

Date: 2/21/2010 8:28:00 PM

Looks great to me!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/21/2010 6:07:00 PM

Another great end line word, Noel! Very well written. Good luck on the contest and thanks for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/20/2010 6:20:00 PM

Dear Noel, WOW A Great Promo POEM for "End Line Word" Form If I know Dane this will definitely be in the Winner's Circle YOUR POETIC Mind is well worth reading and learning the Art YOU Excell my Friend YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:54:00 PM

What a clever take on the whole concept of this new form, Noel. You DID it and I wish you luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2010 10:05:00 AM

I think Dane Ann and HG will love your "end-line" poem, Noel. None of us ever tried it before and it was quite challenging. I really like the way you conclude yours by offering encouragement to all who attempt this form. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 10:05:00 PM

Excellent Noel.. a perfect End Line Word poem to compliment the form ..Dane Ann and HG will be so happy ... this form is quickly catching on as u are now added to the ever growing list of poets utilizing form.. I have about 7 End Line Word poems posted too... unique and a great asset to the form ..luv.. Linda-Marie..