An Atomical Date

Anatomical Date

She was primped and properly tony
prime rib encasing baloney
a troubling thing
anatomical bling
for all of her assets were phony


John G. Lawless
©2.2.2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rigoler Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Haha! Clever limerick with a word play in the title too! Lots of people fit this limerick, John. Thanks for reading my acroustic on Martial. a major influence on my writing humorous verse. Best to you. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 4:44 PM
I’m with Jan! Made me giggle too!
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 10:41 AM
made me giggle John:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Giggles :)
Turner Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 7:55 AM
very funny, John. You made me laugh out loud.
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