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An Array of Stars

As I sat a young man passed me full throttle on his way up a hill-- above him an array of stars; I wondered which he would choose till he fell back to earth a magnet of reality its bloody gauss called history… at last to understand why I write poetry

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Date: 3/15/2019 10:17:00 AM
Superb poem, Joe! "Magnet of reality"--great metaphor! Janice
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/15/2019 1:33:00 PM
Very kind of you: thank you. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 3/13/2019 11:38:00 PM
Truly excellent! That third stanza is amazing.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/15/2019 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.; have a beautiful day!
Date: 3/13/2019 7:14:00 AM
Beautifully said; great imagery, there is such a seasoned wiseness in this poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/13/2019 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren; the old brain still has a few sparks. Have a great day!

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