An Aroma

an aroma floats
delightful scent fills the room...
tangerine lost skin

mouth salivating
liquid orange slips down throat..
one simple pleasure

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Mark Peterson

December 30, 2013 at 4:44 AM

Ah, I wish we could all have our private orangeries that we might sneak away and quench. Happy New Year, Sara.

Scott Thirtyseven

December 28, 2013 at 7:01 PM

Like these haiku, a sweet pleasure.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 28, 2013 at 6:19 PM

Blessings for healing for the New Year and kudos on this wonderful haiku too Sara!

David Williams

December 28, 2013 at 3:48 PM

Sara great set here….David

Nette Onclaud

December 28, 2013 at 11:14 AM

a few more days and it;s a happy, happy new yera, sara... may 2014 b;ess you with more joy!.. huggs

Anne Rutherford

December 28, 2013 at 6:55 AM

Sara your poem is so vivid I can taste it. Superb !! Anne

Ken Carroll

December 27, 2013 at 10:01 PM

Hi Sara, A yummy write..Happy Holidays! Ken

Russell Sivey

December 27, 2013 at 9:37 PM

This is such an aroma filled write that is placed within a small space! I really loved reading this delightful poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Sandra Adams

December 27, 2013 at 7:21 PM

yummy haiku....enjoyed reading this delight tonight Sara :)

Mustapha Mohammed

December 27, 2013 at 7:14 PM

Nice word imagery Sara.

Cherl Dunn

December 27, 2013 at 5:58 PM

Your words make it sound like a wonderful thirst quenching drink thank you for sharing, and also for the words of congrad for my true meaning of christmas poem. cheri