An Aroma

an aroma floats
delightful scent fills the room...
tangerine lost skin

mouth salivating
liquid orange slips down throat..
one simple pleasure

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Mark Peterson

Date: 12/30/2013 4:44:00 AM

Ah, I wish we could all have our private orangeries that we might sneak away and quench. Happy New Year, Sara.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/28/2013 7:01:00 PM

Like these haiku, a sweet pleasure.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/28/2013 6:19:00 PM

Blessings for healing for the New Year and kudos on this wonderful haiku too Sara!

David Williams

Date: 12/28/2013 3:48:00 PM

Sara great set here….David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/28/2013 11:14:00 AM

a few more days and it;s a happy, happy new yera, sara... may 2014 b;ess you with more joy!.. huggs

Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/28/2013 6:55:00 AM

Sara your poem is so vivid I can taste it. Superb !! Anne

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/27/2013 10:01:00 PM

Hi Sara, A yummy write..Happy Holidays! Ken

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/27/2013 9:37:00 PM

This is such an aroma filled write that is placed within a small space! I really loved reading this delightful poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2013 7:21:00 PM

yummy haiku....enjoyed reading this delight tonight Sara :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 12/27/2013 7:14:00 PM

Nice word imagery Sara.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/27/2013 5:58:00 PM

Your words make it sound like a wonderful thirst quenching drink thank you for sharing, and also for the words of congrad for my true meaning of christmas poem. cheri

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2013 11:48:00 AM

sensory 'ku, sara; relishing the scents of your write!.. moreover, may this season shower you with great health and peace... joy to your world; huggs