An Argument With the Floor

Had an argument with the floor and the floor won A rematch is scheduled, this time I'll be packing a gun Not taking any chances Won't end up on the canvass Pump some slugs in it's under belly and watch all the fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 12:11 PM
I too have met the speeding planet too many a time ;) thanks for the giggle locked and loaded Jack xomo
Ellison Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:39 PM
"canvASS"!!! love it Miss Canucky!!! Sure came out on the wrong end of this one!!! Love Mo!!! xxx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 12:12 PM
& love "canvASS"
Flats Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:24 AM
I've fought the floor before//Even wrestled a door//Both of them won//It wasn't fun//but I won't declare a war. SLUG ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Guess I'll NEVER learn... should send you a pic of my kisser! NAW! Too frightening!!! HEY HEY JOHN JOHN!!!
Sivey Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Your humor always brings me a smile Jack! I love the lines "Not taking any chances/won't end up on the canvass" those a awesome lines there! What a beautiful work of art my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! Thank you for sharing it with us! Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:43 PM
You are much too kind Russell!!! Thank you my good friend!!!
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