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An Argument With the Floor

Had an argument with the floor and the floor won A rematch is scheduled, this time I'll be packing a gun Not taking any chances Won't end up on the canvass Pump some slugs in it's under belly and watch all the fun

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/21/2017 12:11:00 PM

I too have met the speeding planet too many a time ;) thanks for the giggle locked and loaded Jack xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2017 5:39:00 PM

"canvASS"!!! love it Miss Canucky!!! Sure came out on the wrong end of this one!!! Love Mo!!! xxx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/21/2017 12:12:00 PM

& love "canvASS"

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/21/2017 8:24:00 AM

I've fought the floor before//Even wrestled a door//Both of them won//It wasn't fun//but I won't declare a war. SLUG ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2017 5:41:00 PM

Guess I'll NEVER learn... should send you a pic of my kisser! NAW! Too frightening!!! HEY HEY JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/21/2017 7:26:00 AM

Your humor always brings me a smile Jack! I love the lines "Not taking any chances/won't end up on the canvass" those a awesome lines there! What a beautiful work of art my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! Thank you for sharing it with us! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2017 5:43:00 PM

You are much too kind Russell!!! Thank you my good friend!!!