An Aqua Reverie

The great mystery of the House of God
Within the aqua reverie of a facade 

A choice He gives to us- of evil or good
All we ever do is divinely understood.

An apparition of Heaven held in a hand
Given by the Creator, for us to understand.

Glimpses of euphoria and merriment we envision 
Heaven- the reward bestowed for the right decision

The great mystery of the House of God
Be worthy in this life; and at the Gate you'll get a nod.

There are but a few things He demands
You, alone, carry the power in your hands.



Honorable Mention in the "The Power in Your Hands" contest by 
Carolyn Devonshire.

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/24/2010 2:44:00 PM
I think you did really well with this challenge, Congrats for the winners circle. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations Amy on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:14:00 PM
how true that is!
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:51:00 PM
wnderful win Amy.. congrats Michael
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:24:00 PM
A gem of a poem Amy, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/23/2010 12:10:00 PM
Congrlatulations on a wonderful poem and well deserved win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:25:00 AM
I am surely looking to get that nod, at those beautiful gates Amy. We do have a choice, we must understand. Congratulations on a worthy poem presentation's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:12:00 AM
Life IS all about making choices, Amy. Very nice interpretation of the photo. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:02:00 PM
WINNER prediction.. AWESOME AMY strikes again.. right on girl ... u nailed the photo and intense write all the way.. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:15:00 AM
wishing you good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/19/2010 4:00:00 AM
A wonderful entry into the contest. Good luck, Amy
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