An Apology For Parting

Please don't be distressed,
It's become a tangled mess.
You don't want me here.
Every meeting has its end,
Perhaps someday we'll be friends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fawcett Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 12:02 AM
Great Tanka, Jim. Love the last line. Best wishes, Nigel
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November 20, 2008 at 11:18 AM
as one jim to another this was a great poem. know the feeling, been there many a time, though it has been a long time. My best friend i ever had was Danny Wilson the only wilso i ever knew.
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