An Apologetic Prosy

There was a time, when I felt totally undesirable unjustifiably [I now know] and you being in your infancy felt so.. un-understood, writhing in a man’s body, seemingly a child with the heart of a warrior, a man, with all a man’s needs. There was a time, when time stood still, and time meant nothing, and age was but an unjustifiable number on a page of societal crap. I needed you. You wanted me. And so………….we were. There was a time, so long ago, it seems a passing dream; we paired, we parted, and life went on… Now, as time seems to slide by with the speed of passing film I remember, not without wonder…Who am I? And where are you? Do you remember? I am not at all sure [for who ever is…] and I am sorry, if our momentary joy, brought you anything else...In the deep of night sometimes [often, truth be told] I wonder, should I say….sorry? for loving you?
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February 25, 2013 at 5:03 PM
a nice poem SKAT
Kovacs Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on your win. Sorry this is late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.
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January 19, 2013 at 6:35 AM
sorry i am late with congratulations Debbie, life caught up with me lo l xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:18 PM
Love it , Debs. congrats on this win.
May Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 9:16 PM
congrats on a great win...
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January 15, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Congrats!
Liwayway Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 11:37 AM
lovely write...Congratulations on your win friend Debbie. Good day always!! hugs, Maria
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Debbie~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD
Ober Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Wow, this is such an open, honest write. I especially love the ending. Congratulations!
A   Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:42 PM
DEBBIE , congratulations, with your awesome poem in MICHAEL'S contest..... xox~pd
Macfarlane Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:29 PM
So sincere and touching Debbie. Congrats on this wonderful write. Hugs
Gasun Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 7:50 AM
My hearty congratulations on your awesome win, Debbie! hugs:) Leonora
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Liwayway Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 1:39 AM
lovely write friend Debbie...Congrats on your win :)
Pettit Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Time has never stood still for me. Congratulations on your win Debbie.
Grisetti Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 7:26 PM
I guess this is the type of question we all have about someone or something in our past. You have written an extremely sensitive poem. Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 4:45 PM
A very deep and moving winning poem Debbie. A big congrats.
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October 8, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Congrats Debbie on my only 5 winner contest with your 4 th place win. Loved it !! Great work my dear sweet friend. Luv n hugs Michael
Collins Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Hi Debbie - I am mystified and enthralled at this one. love, Kathy (soup mail)
Mannan Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 11:35 PM
This is different Deb, deep and unique. I liked it alot.
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