An Answer To At the River Song In Progress-

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Walking through river Free Photo

< based on words by PARIS-MAREE BOREHAM 


At the river song in progress She was walking on watercourse side Upright I was just there I cry Our aperture optic orbs spied Each other's visual spear oh! I come as a river song As I stand here I come The words of angels beloved I sing Sing a river song Come with me darling Singing come, come along come along We see each other Let's walk along edge of rivers edge cover Where we stand on the edge at a river song in progress Come with me darling Saying come come along Come along Start across standing on the rocks We walk closer together we stop we talk I must go I shall show She's a beloved angel Embracing and starstruck giddiness sturdy I will go I must go I shall show Show her my ways It's time for me to embrace her As we walk we talk on the land alongside the Riverside As we both whisper water I spy By my side a woman We bring together We sing in harmony In progress at the River song Just two persons in progress singing the river song
1/5/22 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr & Paris-Maree Boreham ©2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/7/2022 9:35:00 AM
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