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An Angels Face

An Angel's Face There she was, lost between starched white sheets feeding tubes inserted heart monitors in place The family was outside in the hallway praying while mom held her hand and sang to her Then in the softness of a whispered prayerful hour the machine began to beep and all hell broke loose Doctors and nurses rushed to her side, stark sober as a dying child left, mom staggered a cry "please " Paddles were set in place as everyone prayed not a sound was uttered from our lips as we waited Meanwhile in heaven the peek of an angel's face brought down a house of angels as the heart stopped There she lay tangled up between life and death one filament chord detached and up she went When she saw her mother's tears , she returned with all the courage one could muster, She squeezed back into her broken body, and lived....

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Date: 7/4/2022 12:36:00 PM
A wonderful write/picture. Love your ending, "She squeezed back into her broken body, and lived..." That said it all. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 7/4/2022 4:24:00 AM
I’m sure she’d be able to share visions of unconditional love and light from her NDE, as an inspiration for her parents. YouTube has several NDE channels ~ The Jeff Mara podcast is a popular one.
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Date: 7/4/2022 3:26:00 AM
How glad i am that the girl survived. May God be with her always. Hugs xx
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Date: 7/3/2022 1:27:00 PM
The oxymoron metaphors of life and death are so well presented with sensitive vibes... Silpika
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Date: 7/3/2022 2:26:00 PM
Yes Life and Death always up to the creator, never that easy to make that choice sometimes, thank you for reading.
Date: 7/3/2022 12:57:00 PM
Beautifully written. Engaging and heart tugging.
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Date: 7/3/2022 2:26:00 PM
It is always sad when I young one gets sick

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