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An Angel In Disguise

Out the window pane she stares this day as others gone by. The Streaming sun on the hay about and around; Add a golden touch to this dingy room. Drought she cried her eyes here thinking like a rose she would; but Glad that cloudy day the bee whirred and had her head snap towards the Streaking rays that part the grey tenderly. On her lap her trusted friend sits faithfully from then, Sharing her secret visions of the day when the Tunnel will boast of light; a Dawn when an angel in disguise will ride their way; Tug them away from this life not of their choice, and so she sits each day - Clinging with that hidden smile to the hope that sprout that day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2015 8:59:00 AM
"Clinging with that hidden smile to the hope that sprout that day. " lovely! Well penned
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:10:00 AM
love this. Beautiful :)
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 4/8/2015 3:19:00 AM
Hello Sasha...thank you for visiting!
Date: 3/18/2015 5:34:00 AM
- Oh .... what lovely and touching poem,Grace !! - it deserves a big 7! - I wish you a beautiful day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/18/2015 6:11:00 AM
Hi Anne, thanks a lot for your kind words. Blessed times to you!
Date: 3/17/2015 7:33:00 PM
Intriguing yet a poem with vivid imagery and powerful lines.. :)! thank you for visiting my page.. :)!
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/18/2015 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Eloisa. Love reading your work and thank you too for visiting!
Date: 3/16/2015 8:18:00 PM
a very interesting one about this older woman sitting with her dog(or cat?) and dreaming of heaven. Inventive!
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/17/2015 3:08:00 AM
Hi Andrea...it's your second guess. Thanks for dropping by!
Date: 3/16/2015 1:43:00 AM
Defining a good poet is not every Tom's walk in the park. However, it's easy to tell a poet when you see one - Mutindi, you are a poet...
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/16/2015 5:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Mumo for these kind words and so are you - your poems are full of life!
Date: 3/7/2015 6:20:00 AM
Hi grace, great imagery and a powerful poem full of emotions and the longing for a hope... this one grace is full of emotions.. ope the angel in disguise wont keep her waiting for long***blessings***Lewis
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Grace Mutindi
Date: 3/9/2015 4:04:00 AM
Hi Nyaga, thanks a lot for dropping by and for these kind words...hoping too that she won't be kept in waiting for long! blessing to you too!

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