Afroze Ali Poet Rhyme

An Angel In Disguise

Between the sun and the moon
is a dimming, starless sky
filled with hues of contemplation.
She knows the time will come too soon,
so she holds a silent conversation
before she bids her horse good bye.

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Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2015 at 8:12 AM I like the approach you took. Congratulations.

Reason A. Poteet March 21, 2015 at 8:10 AM You conjure up a range of thoughts here. Well-done and congrats on your well-deserved first place. Glad you posted this.

Eve Roper March 20, 2015 at 5:57 PM Afroze, a seven and congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Constance La France March 20, 2015 at 4:17 PM Afroze, congratulations on your 1st place win with this wonderful poem, a perfect 7 . . .

Sasha Maharaj March 20, 2015 at 2:16 PM Beautiful Congrats on your win Afroze:)

Skat A March 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM HI AFROZE, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM Afroze, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Shaw March 20, 2015 at 1:23 PM This is so beautifully written. I love it! Big congrats on your top win. hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison March 20, 2015 at 1:01 PM Dropping back to congratulate you on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 12:35 PM Delightful imagery - you painted a lovely picture with your words - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx