An Angel In Disguise

The stream meanders down its age old course Spilling over rocks and splashing round her feet Soft beauty of its solitude make her labors light In dappled peace nature's whispers so endorse Her fancies released on tender wings of flight Revealing a mind and body for this day replete
Visual Number 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Barbara, congratulations on your win with this lovely, dream poem, a perfect 7 . . .
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Bravo! A well deserved placement.
Gorelick Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Thank you so much..it was a nice surprise..Barbara
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 6:00 PM
A seven and a congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve
Gorelick Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:00 AM
thank you for your support Eve..Barbara
Maharaj Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on your win Barbra :)
Gorelick Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:01 AM
So nice of you to drop by..thank you! BArbara
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Lovely, Barbara. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful...congrats on a great win
Gorelick Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:01 AM
thank you Joseph, I appreciate your support. Barbara
A  Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:13 PM
NICE.....................SKAT
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Barbara, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Barbara! This poem is such a delight to read. Hugs, Kimberly
Gorelick Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Glad to hear from you..and thank you! Barbara
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Wow a sublime free verse in subtle poetic description. Nice to read u again. Take care.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Beautiful imagery to compliment the picture, Barbara! Best wishes...hugs, Rhonda
Gorelick Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 6:51 PM
So good to hear from you.thank you so much. It seems my muse has pretty much deserted me so your comments are very welcome. Hope all is well with you and yours..Barbara
Peranteau Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Did you take a course in Literature Barbara? Awesom picture here dear poet...your words are intense, as if you were gazing at a painting in a museum, great write. ;) have a blessed weekend, and it has been a while since I read you. I came across a write that you commented on some time back and decided to peek in on ya. I see another of your writes which I'm going to check out....see ya, love james
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February 15, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Very nicely done, Barbara! :) john.
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM
You painted a wonderful picture Barbara - good luck in the contest - I always find the images Isaiah find for us to be so inspirational:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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