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An Angel In Disguise

The stream meanders down its age old course Spilling over rocks and splashing round her feet Soft beauty of its solitude make her labors light In dappled peace nature's whispers so endorse Her fancies released on tender wings of flight Revealing a mind and body for this day replete Visual Number 6

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Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 6:31:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on your win with this lovely, dream poem, a perfect 7 . . .

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/21/2015 8:19:00 AM

Bravo! A well deserved placement.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/21/2015 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so much..it was a nice surprise..Barbara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2015 6:00:00 PM

A seven and a congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/21/2015 11:00:00 AM

thank you for your support Eve..Barbara

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 3/20/2015 3:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win Barbra :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/21/2015 11:01:00 AM

So nice of you to drop by..thank you! BArbara

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/20/2015 3:37:00 PM

Lovely, Barbara. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2015 2:50:00 PM

Beautiful...congrats on a great win

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/21/2015 11:01:00 AM

thank you Joseph, I appreciate your support. Barbara

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2015 2:13:00 PM

NICE.....................SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2015 2:02:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/20/2015 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Barbara! This poem is such a delight to read. Hugs, Kimberly

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/21/2015 11:02:00 AM

Glad to hear from you..and thank you! Barbara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2015 1:01:00 PM

Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/18/2015 8:59:00 AM

Wow a sublime free verse in subtle poetic description. Nice to read u again. Take care.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2015 6:51:00 PM

Beautiful imagery to compliment the picture, Barbara! Best wishes...hugs, Rhonda

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/15/2015 6:51:00 PM

So good to hear from you.thank you so much. It seems my muse has pretty much deserted me so your comments are very welcome. Hope all is well with you and yours..Barbara

James Peranteau

Date: 2/15/2015 11:41:00 AM

Did you take a course in Literature Barbara? Awesom picture here dear poet...your words are intense, as if you were gazing at a painting in a museum, great write. ;) have a blessed weekend, and it has been a while since I read you. I came across a write that you commented on some time back and decided to peek in on ya. I see another of your writes which I'm going to check out....see ya, love james

John Fleming

Date: 2/15/2015 1:39:00 AM

Very nicely done, Barbara! :) john.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 7:09:00 PM

You painted a wonderful picture Barbara - good luck in the contest - I always find the images Isaiah find for us to be so inspirational:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx