An American Thanksgiving Retourne

Plans are made and family gather
by land or air, back to their roots.
Excitement builds; home is in view!
Across the nation, what great feasts!

By land or air, back to their roots
many have traveled; some have not!
Some, with dread, come out of duty,
but many others come with smiles.

Excitement builds; home is in view.
Kids at last can see their cousins!
Some may return to leaf-strewn streets.
Others come sliding in on ice! 

Across the nation, what great feasts,
with turkey passed round the tables.
With relatives, friends or colleagues,
folk chat and give thanks on this day!


For the Thanksgiving Day Contest 
of Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Merryman Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 8:09 PM
A warm, inviting write, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Crisci Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Andrea. You described well Thanksgiving Day in your warm and festive poem. Enjoy your Thanksgiving Day with your family. Hugs, Andrew.
Sergi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Hi Andrea: A great poem done well for a great tradition.
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Conrad's and thanks so much for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form! Light & Love
A  Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
Leiser Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 3:02 PM
I really liked this, Andrea! I could feel the anticipation of Thanksgiving build in your great poem, too. GL in the contest :)
Duncan Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 12:36 AM
I liked reading about family time and travel. Happy Thanksgiving to you :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 10:15 PM
You always seem to be able to write in repeating lines so wonderfully Andrea. It never sounds forced which is a feat many have yet to master, including myself. This should do well in the contest my friend! It sums up Thanksgiving so beautifully. #7
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:38 PM
This is all an American truth - the trips I have taken to be with my parents and siblings are numerous, this year, my son travels to me. What isn't mentioned is all the hurry, hurry, rush, rush that we need to eliminate. Good job .... CayCay
Walker Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:31 PM
What a treat to read.
Callus Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 11:02 AM
A most lovely description of Thanksgiving, Andrea! I think that my entry will be classed as "out-of-point"; my idea of "holiday" is different from the American one, so I branched out to the type of holiday which you would call a vacation! // paul
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Hi CayCay...to us a holiday is also taking time off to go abroad touring, etc. Most entries I have seen deal with Thanksgiving, Christmas...(special occasions, if you know what I mean). My entry deals with a trip to India. Maybe I'm being fussy!:)
Godwin Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 8:07 AM
I know the English use holiday for vacation, but what do y'all use for what we call a holiday? I'm so sorry to intrude on Andrea's page, but I am curious and thought she might be as well. OK, I should scoot out of this box ... CayCay
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:22 AM
A holiday I always yearned to celebrate on the isle. Thanksgiving day is one of those days where friends and family gather together to thank the lord. For me it means a lot. Lovely poem.
Martin Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Very enjoyable write, Andrea! Have been there!!! Thanks for your continuing support of my writing.
Inman Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Wonderful Andrea, I hope your return home is a very happy one. Oh, in answer to your question, I have a couple resent ones that you haven't commented on, whether you've read them or not I don't know: 1-Dragons, 2-Sorry, & 3-Wind
Nau Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Love the homecoming here that spells families in contact after separation. Clear snap shots in this family album. Enjoyed the presentation of the different journeys home. Nicely done.
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:43 PM
A time to rekindle the family fire, reminisce, enjoy those familiar foods again.
Austin Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 11:35 AM
It's been so long since I sat down to Thanksgiving table with relatives. This brings back memories that my recent Thanksgiving feasts cannot touch. Love, daver
La France Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Andrea, I love this 7, great writing for the contest, best of luck ~
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:26 AM
Love your feelings on Thanksgiving. Nicely written. You make me want to have it right away so I can feel what you describe. Have a nice day Andrea...Blessings your way.
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:07 AM
A time for families to come together - make it beef not turkey for me though! Hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Spanish style turkey with ground beef stuffing, MMMMmmm
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:46 AM
- A pleasant family and friends day (I think .... we have not Thanksgiving in Norway) - Enjoy the day, Andrea - A wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Let the turkey passed round the table and enjoy your day. Thanks for sharing it. Enjoyed reading it.
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