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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 February 10
Image: Austen's Dress Portrait by Tumblr

 
Tumblr | Portrait painting, Portrait, Dress painting
A sofening touched a light aglow, as a remote trail took a slight bend, Saw nature pray o'er a sheet of snow, twas but a gust of wind, to and fro, I thought 'twas a hoot if I pretend. Further down the bend had turned a bit, now at the bottom of the foothills, the park's bench, I saw the whole of it, the stars were fantastic I admit, to the whole, it was gifts of the wills. The half-slept town lay barely ahead, the late farmers market was open, fresh was sold out, not much on the spread, since they're closing, all half-priced instead, I knew of it, I heard it spoken. So where, with my bag of groceries, as I walk along the boulevards, stalks of leafy vegetables and cheese while shops close, a late-night snack will please, nice dress, pricey, best give my regards. At last, my penthouse view of Paris, a message from Mom who's in Boston, Mom ... M]why there ... you lived here ... M]I don't miss, You met Dad here ... M]well, he's on the list Will I be them ... M]the next Jane Austen?

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Date: 2/10/2024 6:28:00 PM
Enchanting poem love the photo. Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 2/10/2024 9:05:00 PM
I'm delighted, Karen, with your thought-filled share, my friend. Aloha, William

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