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Inspired by "Etymology" contest

Sponsor: Suzette Richards

August 14, 2023

 

An Alluring Flower

How fortunate do I feel,
when I think of my mother, deriving
my name from the classic story
by Kalidasa, the greatest Bard in Sanskrit -
The story about the Princess of Malawa,
who happened to be in disguise as a
humble dancer in the court of Prince Agnimitra!

The Prince was enamoured with her beauty and charm...
her magical voice and spectacular dance
made him swoon...
After some complicating chain of events,
the romantic story ended with their happy union!
So delighted to inherit the name of
the heroine of such a historical epic 
          with thrilling romance
          and gripping intrigue!

My name means a beautiful flower, in Bengali,
a purple flower, graceful, delicate and fragrant…
My parents were joyful and ecstatic
when they had a daughter after a long wait...
an alluring flower’s name seemed 
the best option to them, for their daughter!

The first part of my name means a “garland”
which my father pictured to be on his neck,
He imagined his daughter to be strong and brave, 
yet kind and graceful!
He dreamed of his daughter becoming a powerful writer!
very unusual for those days, and for the country 
where he lived!

Isn’t that a wonderful feeling when
one realizes how precious she must have
been to her beloved parents!
                 
                 She was part of their dreams!
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Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Yes, it is, Mala. Your name fits you well. A lovely story in poetic form. Thanks for sharing it with us. I know your parents are proud of you. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, Bill. You are so kind to pay visit to my humble page, and leave beautiful comments! Your comment made my day!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 1:50 PM
A wonderful write/name. I enjoyed reading your story. Have a great day writing away.............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Dear Paula. Really appreciate your visit and comment.
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