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an air of spring -

                                                           spring-tide breeze blows,

                                                 tickling blossoms on a plum

                                      branch, set free, loose and

                            giggling in the air, dancing

                     in the gold sun like pixies ...

                capricious in their flight, a

            whimsical drift, aromatic,

         elegant and flawless like

        the wild wishes of a child ...

         floating to purpose anew,

              to alight on a dream afar,

                       enigmatic, joyous, true ...

                              as blessed in the journey

                                      as they are in the order

                                           of their exquisite design,

                                               as sure with their destiny

                                                 as they are in the perfect,

                                                sweet, resplendent sacrifice ...

                                             sublime essence of being,

                                       the lifeblood of existence ...

                                a bright, crisp, glorious

                        morning breath of nature ...

                itself.






~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Strand Pick E, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
Such a beautiful picture of spring, Gregory! Congratulations! Love the "wild wishes of a child!"
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Date: 3/7/2018 1:34:00 PM
Love your uplifting imagery of Spring and the wonderful artistic shape of your poem, Gregory. Congratulations on another fine win. Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:42:00 PM
You are always kind to me, Sandra, and I am so thankful for that and your friendship ... blessings, Dear Poet! You are one of the finest poets AND kindest people on Poetry Soup, and a gem of a human being - I'm proud to know you. :-) <3
Date: 3/6/2018 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful presentation, Gregory. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:39:00 PM
Very sweet of you, Line - thanks so much! :-)
Date: 3/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
Lovely ink Greg, co grats on your win! xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mo - blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 3/5/2018 12:27:00 PM
Your poem captured the essence of Spring....... and the form is magic !! It is if the springtime breeze has swept the words along one by one! So lovely!! Congrats to you !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:39:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Carrie, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem ... blessings and thanks to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/5/2018 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:38:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Emile, I am so honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers, and humbled by the placement! Blessings to you! :-)
Date: 3/5/2018 12:59:00 AM
This poem contains the magic of your touch Greg! It is elegant and magnificent!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:37:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Connie - thank you so much, my friend! I'm happy you liked this one! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 1:40:00 PM
This is lovely, Gregory. Good luck in the contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 6:36:00 PM
Many thanks, Agnes ... I appreciate it! :-) <3
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