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An Afternoon Adventure

There have not been very many days in my life well in fact, this is the only one, on which I could say “I rode on a donkey cart today.” Sitting quietly on the porch of my mother-in-law’s home, typing away on my laptop, a knock came at the gate and my name was hollered over the fence, an invitation for a ride. I don’t think there is anything quite like the dirt flying in your face with the wind blowing in your hair, and the way the world—(mainly your poems and your laptop)— is being swiftly left behind you, with the methodical whack of a donkey’s back with a big heavy stick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/7/2024 11:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/28/2016 7:27:00 AM
Theirsa T, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:10:00 PM
theresa, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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