An Affinity For Yellow

and Vincent, the Artist applies on the canvas
a black stroke here and a black stroke there
before the crows disperse and disappear
he steps back to observe but his mind
is uneasy his affinity for the bright color yellow
is enhancing his depressive manic state
and he  must strive for completion 
before it’s too late for his art and his soul
will be lost to his inevitable fate
but the Van Gogh legend must carry on
that he must fall and rise again
to seek out the night and to paint the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Udaeta Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Wonderful. I like the imagery and inspiration in the writing. :)
Sergi Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you, Melani.
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 11:21 AM
simply sensational imagery I adore this write Ralph. hugs jan xxx
Shiells Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Hi Ralph, This was a sensational piece of artistry. Well written my friend. Thanks so much for sharing this with us and congrats on this being featured. Love and Peace, Deborah
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May 22, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Ralph,, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
Sergi Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Hi SKAT: Thank you. It wasn't a winner but I really enjoyed writing this poem.
Gorelick Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Congrats on your featured poem. I hadn't caught this one before, but enjoyed it. Just finished a book on Van Gogh.BG
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Very nice. And I like how you were writing about that marvelous artist VAn Gogh. I don't know much about what colors he had an affinity to. I always just remember Starry night when I think of him!!!
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April 19, 2014 at 7:48 PM
I like all the thought and imagery you put into this piece. Did you mean strive for completion? small change but I think it adds to the flow of your piece. I expect this will do very well in the contest.
Wegman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Ralph, your words minister! I am a watercolour painter and love the color yellow, which seems to outline, underscore, and add life to all the ogther colors in the palette. Great poem. Thanks for sharing!
Sergi Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Hi Michael: Thank you for your comment. I was in the art field myself and I did some research on his life. The combination of his meds and absinthe created this yellow so it wasn't exactly artistic license.
Deschler Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Your words have painted a wonderful picture of what inspired one of the greatest artists that ever lived. A very passionate and beautiful write, Ralph. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for the kind comments! :)
Sergi Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Hi Peter: Thank you for your comment. I an also a fan of Van Gogh. I did some research on his life and entered a contest.
Sangwai Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:50 PM
A deep thought . It was a nice read.
Sergi Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Hi Neelam, nice to know you. Thank you for your comment.
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