An Abc Love Song

Leaves have fallen around us throughout these many years Mist has clouded our eyes with vapors of vast confusion... No one told us then, how storms might come, how skies would gather tears Or how the sun would often hide, and seem to disappear Perhaps those years, might have done such harm, to have shattered our illusions Instead, we lean into each other's arms, and will stay until conclusion...
________________________ For Alfred's Contest: ABC of Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:09 AM
I don't understand the ABC form, however this is sweet
Williams Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 4:50 PM
This poem reminds me of a story teller, which is the like of myself. I love story telling and I see you do also. Please contribute more.
Anglesey Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Lovely flow and words perfectly describe a relationship. Well written and my favorite line "Instead, we lean into each other's arms, and will stay until conclusion..." Wonderful ending :)
A   Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Carrie, A late congratulations on Alfred's ABC of love contest... very lovely... Love * Linda
Gasun Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 3:35 AM
Belated huge hearty congratulations on your top win my dear friend, Carrie! You really write so well & I love your poem. I'll fave it if you don't mind. Thank you so much and have a happy weekend! love lots, Leonora
Guzzi Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Just wonderful! I didn't stand a chance LOL, seldom do with you in he running congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Hunter Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 1:35 PM
This is going to my fave list....so good, Carrie!
Duncan Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:51 PM
I do love this romantic, heart felt song ;} fav's
Roberts Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Loved it Carrie ...Seren
Poet Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Love this Carrie!Beautifully penned.
Konos Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Carrie....great one...AGAIN!
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