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Amusing Walk

Hills and valleys and curvy roads Peeking houses behind tall oaks Morning sun’s tender rays Whistling gust’s soft touches Musical dialogues of chirpy birds Air-dances and rapid flutters Fragrant stars of Jasmin flowers Flourishing marvels of vivid colors Wind chime’s calming tune Amusing walk energizing the mood

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/24/2021 8:18:00 AM

An "Amusing Walk" write. Love It. I am enjoying reading your wonderful writes. Have a blessed day..........................

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/29/2021 11:24:00 AM

I appreciate your feedback Paula!! Thanks for visiting my writes! -Smita

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/7/2021 2:25:00 PM

I get the feeling that you are a nature loving individual--that's hard to miss. You see the beauty everywhere. That's really a lovely gift. You must be feeling good, which is a great thing to have. Let the good wash over you and everything and keep sharing this view for us who may not have the same perception. However, I love reading your work.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 10:23:00 AM

That's true Duke, I'm a totally nature person it keeps me grounded. Thanks for your comments.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2021 1:29:00 PM

There was a time when I would have found such a trip enchanting. Too old now. Still loved the imagery.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 10:22:00 AM

These hikes are truly enchanting for me Victor! Thanks for your comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2021 1:26:00 PM

what sweet imagery i try and walk every day - mother nature is amazing:-) hugs Jan xx

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 10:21:00 AM

You are so right! Mother Nature is truly amazing!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/29/2021 7:02:00 PM

Mmmm! Sounds like my kind of place to spend a little down time. Well done with great imagery. God Bless, JB

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 6/6/2021 8:40:00 PM

Thank you Judy!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/24/2021 9:30:00 AM

Hills and valleys and curvy roads will always mesmerize. Sweet tenor to your words, Smita. Enjoyed the images you created. I am guessing you live here in the US.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 2:47:00 PM

I could guess from your imagery--much credit to you for your poetic skills.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/26/2021 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! Yes, I live here in the US.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2021 4:20:00 PM

cute poem with its spring imagery!

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/26/2021 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!