Amusing

I haven't written a poem all week though I've sat at this desk and not leaked! have you seen my muse is she on a cruise? If I catch her it's her nose I'll tweak!

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Dalila Agtani

Date: 1/27/2012 2:24:00 AM

Debbie I need to read this form still, but I need to find time! Thank you for commenting on my "Serenity Response". That poem was dedicated to my son, Jershon, who is well loved. A very long story of his journey of coming to US. He is still not on federal assistance due to his citizenship. Love Dalila

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 7:51:00 PM

This reminds me of a sonnet I once wrote called Recapturing the Rogue (Muse)! See, here I am not even knowing what to call the meter of that extra little syllable in the front of line one. It must be one of those two you just asked me about in the soupmail! I believe you can mix things up. I seem to remember reading that somewhere!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/26/2012 11:28:00 AM

yes I found a source you can mix the 2!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/25/2012 6:35:00 PM

Even when you don't write you seem to do the job justice! Nice to have some fun with your verses sometimes.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 8:12:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry (which you know I don't) so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Debbie. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/25/2012 4:44:00 AM

love your sense of humour, Debbie. enjoyed this. harry

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/24/2012 4:37:00 PM

She is probably out gallavanting to where ever mine disappeared to a while ago. They always come back but never divulge where they were hangin out, Debbie. I'll keep an eye out for you

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2012 3:40:00 PM

Yup yup NOT perfect meter LOL

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/24/2012 3:31:00 PM

Good one Debbie, love it. Elizabeth