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My mentor of prose - Caren Krutsinger!

I’m a secret watcher of Dr. Who, but now you know, and his tardis is bigger on the inside as the cult following knows. So much philosophy, such as we look much smaller on the outside. It is as if “The Doctor” lives inside his brain as do us poets always imagining something greater...something bigger. And yet we can also reduce something to its smallest component and expound it. We look at a seed, climb inside its shell and see the universe. We keep walking in and out of our world, amazed at its nonconformity to our idea of reality. We see a box, color it blue...just blue the teacher says as she points with a ruler and slams down hard on your knuckles. Persnickety self says “black and blue.” The teacher points “out” and you gladly climb back into your roomy cocoon. A butterfly emerges with Queen Alexandra wings that land on the teachers hair, taunting her, beating her at her game of “inside the lines.” 11/5/2018

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Date: 11/7/2018 11:02:00 AM
Lovely write Kimmy...although I've come to know Caren recently...her universal vibes let me know that she is a beautiful gentle soul...and a mentor to many, I included...love & light...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2018 3:59:00 PM
I appreciate you stopping in! Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 11/6/2018 10:19:00 AM
Incredibly penned; had to "fav" this one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 11/5/2018 8:07:00 AM
Kim, I did not see your poet's notes at all until I clicked on this to FAV it. Thank you! I am so honored and thrilled!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 8:11:00 AM
You just let your thoughts rip and I love it!
Date: 11/5/2018 8:06:00 AM
Quite entertaining and thought provoking.. Though I don't really know Karen, I do know Doctor Who and am a loud fan. :) This was very fun to read Kim and to try and figure out.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2018 8:19:00 AM
Yes, I do know you but I don't in the context that Kim wrote about. Unless...you weren't my 9th grade English teacher were you? :) Just kidding.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2018 8:12:00 AM
Since I’ve been up since 4:30 this crazy prose gets written! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/5/2018 8:08:00 AM
Chris, you do know me. You are my friend!

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