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Amplified Memory

The water is still
       Double images are seen
         Reflections are bright
        This memory amplified
   from lights shining in the night

Heidi Sands

1/14/23

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William Kelii Kekaula

January 18, 2023 at 8:30 PM

An entertaining charm, Heidi, that's lasting, Aloha William

Heidi Sands

January 18, 2023 at 8:44 PM

Nice to hear. Thank you Hilo :)

Janice Canerdy

January 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM

Lovely, descriptive piece, Heidi. Janice

Heidi Sands

January 17, 2023 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Janice :)

Gershon Wolf

January 14, 2023 at 8:28 PM

I really like how you've captured the moment's imagery so well, Heidi. Kudos, Gershon

Heidi Sands

January 15, 2023 at 4:50 AM

Thank you Gershon. This one came from my imagination lol

Vijay Pandit

January 14, 2023 at 5:00 PM

Memories occupy us when we are alone ruminating. Moment well captured, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

January 14, 2023 at 6:33 PM

Hi Vijay I meant to write, This memory is amplified (meaning by the reflections in the water) a double vision. I may edit. And you are right as well. Thank you. :)