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Amplified Memory

The water is still Double images are seen Reflections are bright This memory amplified from lights shining in the night Heidi Sands 1/14/23

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/18/2023 8:30:00 PM

An entertaining charm, Heidi, that's lasting, Aloha William

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2023 8:44:00 PM

Nice to hear. Thank you Hilo :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/17/2023 2:17:00 PM

Lovely, descriptive piece, Heidi. Janice

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/17/2023 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Janice :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2023 8:28:00 PM

I really like how you've captured the moment's imagery so well, Heidi. Kudos, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2023 4:50:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. This one came from my imagination lol

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2023 5:00:00 PM

Memories occupy us when we are alone ruminating. Moment well captured, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2023 6:33:00 PM

Hi Vijay I meant to write, This memory is amplified (meaning by the reflections in the water) a double vision. I may edit. And you are right as well. Thank you. :)

Ann Peck

Date: 1/14/2023 3:25:00 PM

That's so lovely, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Ann :)