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Amplified Memory

The water is still Double images are seen Reflections are bright This memory amplified from lights shining in the night Heidi Sands 1/14/23

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Date: 1/18/2023 8:30:00 PM
An entertaining charm, Heidi, that's lasting, Aloha William
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2023 8:44:00 PM
Nice to hear. Thank you Hilo :)
Date: 1/17/2023 2:17:00 PM
Lovely, descriptive piece, Heidi. Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/17/2023 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 1/14/2023 8:28:00 PM
I really like how you've captured the moment's imagery so well, Heidi. Kudos, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2023 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. This one came from my imagination lol
Date: 1/14/2023 5:00:00 PM
Memories occupy us when we are alone ruminating. Moment well captured, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2023 6:33:00 PM
Hi Vijay I meant to write, This memory is amplified (meaning by the reflections in the water) a double vision. I may edit. And you are right as well. Thank you. :)
Date: 1/14/2023 3:25:00 PM
That's so lovely, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2023 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Ann :)