Sharon Ruebel Poet Senryu

Amour

To love and be loved

    Inhale and exhale as one

        You are his chosen


Shared thoughts planned future

    "Happily ever after"

        You are her chosen

I soon becomes we

    Finally it all makes sense

         Your forever love 



Contest: Special Sentimental Senryu
Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.
Form: Senryu

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Wandering Butterfly February 28, 2011 at 2:55 PM congrats....this is truly a beautiful poem

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Sharon. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin February 18, 2011 at 7:49 AM The theme is so creative, beautifully written, congrats Déirdre

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:40 AM A fantastic win Shar!!!! I so much loved this from the first time I read it...Congrats!!! luv Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 17, 2011 at 11:51 PM Many Congrats Sharon for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:15 PM nice and deep Sharon. Congratulations on a great win

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 1:50 PM This one was so sweet, Sharon. Congratulations to you.

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 10:15 AM Shar, congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest with this beauty, love Wilma

Jimmy Anderson February 17, 2011 at 10:11 AM Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest...Jimmy

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 10:08 AM Wonderful Senryu!Congrats Sharon on your 1st place win.Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages-----kashinath

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:08 AM Beautiful and uplifting! Congratulations on your super First Place Win, Sharon. Enjoy! Love, Annalise

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 5:06 AM Beautiful and profound, dear Sharon. Congrat's on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 7:44 PM Beautiful sense. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 6:46 PM Sharon congratulations on your first place hit. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards February 16, 2011 at 5:54 PM I love the way you entertwined the two first senryus with the last! Congratulations on your win!

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 5:50 PM Sharon, very sweetly written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:40 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:19 PM Congrats Shar on your first place win in my contest,, ,,, thankxx for your support .. poem blew me away ..

Julie Heckman February 8, 2011 at 10:29 AM nice poem...good luck in the contest Julie

George Aul February 5, 2011 at 9:51 AM I really like your words.....very sentimental thoughts. Thanks for the thoughtful comment on my poem......George

Carolyn Devonshire February 4, 2011 at 11:41 AM Wish it could always turn out this way, Sharon. A wonderful entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2011 at 9:28 PM wow, she is just going to love this one!! way to go. Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman February 3, 2011 at 7:58 PM love this wonderful profound contest entry. Harry

Tahera Mannan February 3, 2011 at 7:41 PM This is so sentimental and beautiful. All the very best for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 3, 2011 at 6:34 PM thankxx for supporting my current contest Shar.. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun.. luv... appreciate your luv and support...

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