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To love and be loved Inhale and exhale as one You are his chosen Shared thoughts planned future "Happily ever after" You are her chosen I soon becomes we Finally it all makes sense Your forever love Contest: Special Sentimental Senryu Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Form: Senryu

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Wandering Butterfly

Date: 2/28/2011 2:55:00 PM

congrats....this is truly a beautiful poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Sharon. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/18/2011 7:49:00 AM

The theme is so creative, beautifully written, congrats Déirdre

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/18/2011 4:40:00 AM

A fantastic win Shar!!!! I so much loved this from the first time I read it...Congrats!!! luv Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/17/2011 11:51:00 PM

Many Congrats Sharon for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2011 4:15:00 PM

nice and deep Sharon. Congratulations on a great win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 1:50:00 PM

This one was so sweet, Sharon. Congratulations to you.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/17/2011 10:15:00 AM

Shar, congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest with this beauty, love Wilma

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/17/2011 10:11:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest...Jimmy

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2011 10:08:00 AM

Wonderful Senryu!Congrats Sharon on your 1st place win.Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages-----kashinath

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/17/2011 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful and uplifting! Congratulations on your super First Place Win, Sharon. Enjoy! Love, Annalise

Elaine George

Date: 2/17/2011 5:06:00 AM

Beautiful and profound, dear Sharon. Congrat's on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/16/2011 7:44:00 PM

Beautiful sense. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman

Date: 2/16/2011 6:46:00 PM

Sharon congratulations on your first place hit. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/16/2011 5:54:00 PM

I love the way you entertwined the two first senryus with the last! Congratulations on your win!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2011 5:50:00 PM

Sharon, very sweetly written. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/16/2011 5:40:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 5:19:00 PM

Congrats Shar on your first place win in my contest,, ,,, thankxx for your support .. poem blew me away ..

Julie Heckman

Date: 2/8/2011 10:29:00 AM

nice poem...good luck in the contest Julie

George Aul

Date: 2/5/2011 9:51:00 AM

I really like your words.....very sentimental thoughts. Thanks for the thoughtful comment on my poem......George

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 11:41:00 AM

Wish it could always turn out this way, Sharon. A wonderful entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2011 9:28:00 PM

wow, she is just going to love this one!! way to go. Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 7:58:00 PM

love this wonderful profound contest entry. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/3/2011 7:41:00 PM

This is so sentimental and beautiful. All the very best for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2011 6:34:00 PM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Shar.. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun.. luv... appreciate your luv and support...