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Amongst the Dross

Starring into the dross of amber brew no face see I reflected, simply hollow I. The stein of crystal tells no fortune spare, nor one of bounty, yet what is true? With drink, I dredge the pain of life anew and wallow in the grain of cheaper wares, degrade myself and blame fate, for my strife, ignoring all God's gift, so loud I cry, as salted tears stain trails of my despair. If only, I had been a better wife I'd not be sitting here. Form: Curtal Sonnet [A precurser to the Italian Sonnet] abcabcdbcd c [10 1/2 lines]

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Date: 5/4/2012 5:49:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:30:00 AM
Quite a story in these few lines. congratulations Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:40:00 AM
Very nice Debbie. Congratulations
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Date: 4/25/2012 7:40:00 AM
Hi Debbie, as you said you are sonnet addict I had to just come and read one of yours and get my own fix for the day. An excellent curtal it is too. To get such depth of emotion into 10 and a tail is a mighty challenge and you have done that with style. Great read. Hugs Jemmy
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:29:00 PM
now, this one breaks the heart, if ever I've read a more bittersweet, or painful poem, I don't know when. Stunning in it's sad, and lonely song. Beautifully beautifully written.
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:06:00 PM
very well written Debbie...always ..Joseph
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:46:00 PM
A thought provoking melancholy piece, so well written and moving. If not for the grace. . . .Mahalo, Lotus
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:48:00 PM
...Kisss me baby :)
Date: 4/22/2012 3:45:00 PM
Smile ˜ There's a lady who's sure, all that glitters is gold, and she's buying the stairway to heaven * Paint your love baby ˜ My beautiful love, Always, John!:) ˜
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