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Among the Universe

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Beneath a sparkling canopy of infinite design Enchanted by the sights I see, the magic I now find To dream below this midnight sky of places far away Is more than ever meets the eye, so vast this found display Dimensions of a cosmic feel, no roadmap in my hand Or signs to point out what is real, regardless what was planned These thoughts they gather deep inside, my mind begins to stroll As there is nothing it can hide, beyond my own control To live, I feel so very small, these visions I immerse To gaze above and find it all, among the universe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/6/2021 9:08:00 AM
Lovly rhyme it touches the soul ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Talin
Date: 10/6/2021 8:36:00 AM
The universe is magical, and the night sky at midnight is pure magic.. Well penned
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 9/30/2021 5:21:00 AM
Magnificent, insightful poem, Chris! Looking out at the universe, God gives us a glimpse at the nature of Infinity. Love this deep muse poetry, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Freddie, I appreciate it
Date: 9/27/2021 6:01:00 AM
I can understand this and enjoyed it very much :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi
Date: 9/26/2021 10:41:00 PM
Oh yeah, the universe is vast and we are mere dots in God's infinite plan, great write, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:50:00 PM
Hi Jo, thanks so very much
Date: 9/24/2021 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 9/17/2021 9:13:00 AM
The universe is so full of beautiful imagery to view, ponder, and write. And yes, were a speck of dust to those above. Love the write. Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:51:00 PM
I appreciate you Eve.
Date: 9/17/2021 7:48:00 AM
"As there is nothing it can hide (behind)" ... A contest winner.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:51:00 PM
Thanks so much
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Chris Con
Date: 9/17/2021 7:56:00 AM
"To gaze above and find (myself)"?

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