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Among the Tallest Sunflowers

This youth, with its curiosity to follow dreams, always finds us among the tallest sunflowers that hide us from the bewildered faces of the common people who surely envy us for being here between sunset and darkness, carefully drawing images of a future that could be: choosing those colors that are a bit daffy; and why is isolation a favorite place for two little darlings? And that answer lies in Nature itself surrounding us with an ideal beauty predestined for faithful lovers-to-be: willow trees drooping to reach down to us, brushing our sun-dried hair with their sweetest lullabies of spring; you'll be surprised how the rascal wind teaches them to sing; and we listen to that medley as if it were sung by humans, and the mixed sounds enthrall us with their mellowness... and how did the silent robins,gathered by the shady spruces, ever agree to hear that lovely and tender melody? Live, young hearts, live with a joyous spirit that sets no limits, be like us among the tallest sunflowers: exchanging innocent caresses and timid kisses, and even if your gladness turns into delight ... never be afraid of the approaching night: you will have the steady company of stars; lay down, side by side, and sweetly imagine your paradise! Vanished are the nightly shadows, puzzled butterflies land on your shiny noses... they tickle them until your senses are awakened, you rub your eyelids to be dazzled by an intense glow; is morning the emptiest promise without any dream realized? Run, vibrant hearts, run towards the gleaming horizon miles away; the zealous eagles will keep pace with your footsteps, and before you reach the golden ocean with soft waves: you'll be soaring, like them, over the crimson clouds, and forever remember that the earth was a beautiful place for a day! Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 7/15/2010 6:36:00 AM
Breathtaking poem, Andrew. Thank you a million times for sharing this. You are officially one of my favorite poets! :D -G
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Date: 7/10/2010 11:34:00 AM
A lovely and meaningful write. Congrats
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 1:44:00 AM
breathtakingly beautiful, Andrew. Conbgratulations on your first place win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:50:00 AM
This is beautiful, Andrew. Congratulations on your super fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Frank’s contest. May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:13:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Much to reflection on in this poem. Congratulations on you FIRST PLACE in the Images contest. Enjoy your big honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:19:00 AM
This is just really beautiful, Andrew!! She sure wrote this with such eloquence and grace, I especially loved your last stanza, with those butterflies and gleaming horizons and zealous eagles---very inspiring!! Definitely leaves me with amazing images and inspiration --Super congrats on your 1st place win!! ^_^ --nikko :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:22:00 AM
Awonderful poem. Congratulations on your well deserved place in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:11:00 AM
What a goregeous poem....one of the most beautiful I've read on the soup....Just lovely, Andrew!!!! Congratulations on your win!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:20:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your first place win in the Images contest.. extremely wonderful write.. mesmerizing.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 12/12/2008 4:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem, and I especially love the line "puzzled butterflies land on your noses". What a wonderful image! ~Juliane
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