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Amnesia

Tangled skeins of memories unravel Implacable reverie in melted rainbows Encroached upon asphalt canvas, absorbing New moon's amnesia; her silver shadows confiscate 7/19/19 Originally in 'Patience' on this website

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Sand Blown

Date: 7/31/2019 3:40:00 PM

amnesia is a funny word...it reads like the name of a country

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/25/2019 12:11:00 PM

WoW! Michelle, In a few words you said much. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/26/2019 5:30:00 PM

Appreciate that, many thanks, Alexis!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/23/2019 12:34:00 PM

Ooh, this is good. I’m sure it will do well in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/23/2019 6:13:00 PM

Much appreciate it, Richard-

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/22/2019 10:01:00 AM

An excellent write Michelle, best wishes for what I would forecast a definite win! Hugs, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/22/2019 10:44:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Jennifer-

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/22/2019 8:22:00 AM

Buttery smooth pen. Good luck in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/22/2019 10:43:00 PM

Thanks for your creamy comment, M.L!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/22/2019 6:44:00 AM

Beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/22/2019 10:42:00 PM

Thanks!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/20/2019 1:53:00 AM

My memories said "Hey, we want to unfurl!" but I said, "Hold off. I want to read this one." Beautifully done, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/21/2019 10:59:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment, Caren!

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/19/2019 12:44:00 PM

Beautiful, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/19/2019 4:17:00 PM

Appreciate it, thank you, Line.