Amnesia

Tangled skeins of memories unravel
Implacable reverie in melted rainbows
Encroached upon asphalt canvas, absorbing
New moon's amnesia; her silver shadows confiscate

7/19/19

Originally in 'Patience' on this website
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Blown Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 3:40 PM
amnesia is a funny word...it reads like the name of a country
Y. Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 12:11 PM
WoW! Michelle, In a few words you said much. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Faulkner Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Appreciate that, many thanks, Alexis!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Ooh, this is good. I’m sure it will do well in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Much appreciate it, Richard-
Proxenos Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:01 AM
An excellent write Michelle, best wishes for what I would forecast a definite win! Hugs, Jennifer.
Faulkner Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Thank you kindly, Jennifer-
Kiser Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Buttery smooth pen. Good luck in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thanks for your creamy comment, M.L!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Beautiful!
Faulkner Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Thanks!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 1:53 AM
My memories said "Hey, we want to unfurl!" but I said, "Hold off. I want to read this one." Beautifully done, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, Caren!
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Appreciate it, thank you, Line.
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