Janetta Harrington Poet Free verse

A-Minor

we passed each other
in the night
we each felt the
shudder

The silence 
filled
with 
words
and
hopes...

we killed 
the hope with
blunders

it seemed so simple
to ask you to go ...

janetta

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John Heck November 30, 2008 at 6:10 AM Janetta - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter November 11, 2008 at 8:45 AM Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan November 3, 2008 at 4:54 AM Janetta - still so very deep - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown October 30, 2008 at 6:29 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown July 30, 2008 at 4:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. July 28, 2008 at 9:13 AM Congratulations Janetta, on "A-MINOR" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince

Sharon Winter July 28, 2008 at 5:36 AM Congratulations Janetta on this most interesting poem being featured this week. Thought provoking. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan July 27, 2008 at 6:14 PM There is so much said on your relationship in this poem - congrats on the feature

July 27, 2008 at 5:40 PM The short lines work well in this one. Much to think about here. Congratulations on having you poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen