Amidst the Shaded Sun

Sitting, quiet and still
Breathing the air that nature provides
Where spirit and self become one

Upon the waters beside the mill
In the picture that never hides
Amidst the shaded sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/12/2014 8:21:00 AM
This is quite beautiful Roger.
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:50:00 AM
Why thank you Richard, It was a different style I was trying
Date: 12/20/2013 5:54:00 PM
Lovely imagery throughout. How captivating. I connected with this verse. Very nicely written. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/20/2013 8:56:00 PM
Your so sweet Laura, It is so lovely to hear from you....Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/2/2013 6:04:00 PM
A wonderful picture that you have painted here, Roger! I really enjoyed reading this one tonight! Nicely done!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poems. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Kelly, I enjoyed reading your poems to...Roger
Date: 11/30/2013 10:16:00 PM
I am seeing now that it was your own quote, How did I not see that!!! I guess because you put quotes around it, I was thinking the title was a quote from something. Hey, you said you liked bacon. You should have seen the marvelous bacon treats my daughter in law made for thanksgiving. She wrapped slices of bacon around crackers and cheese and baked in the oven. To die for!!
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Date: 12/1/2013 12:06:00 AM
I would have gotten full on those snacks before the main course was done. I hope you had fun on your thanksgiving....Roger
Date: 11/12/2013 9:55:00 AM
a lovely picture ,congrats Roger.
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:24:00 PM
Thank you very much. Roger
Date: 11/10/2013 11:14:00 PM
Well done...the third line did it for me..congrats. BG
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Barbara, Roger
Date: 11/10/2013 5:19:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Roger Horsch
Date: 11/10/2013 7:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara, I enjoyed writing this one
Date: 11/9/2013 6:17:00 PM
WOW, I echo PD on this one. yours is a different interpretation from mine, but I really like it. And I love how you used a famous quote as the finish line for it. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, But I must tell you that I did not know of a famous quote. The last line and every line was directly from my head. If it mirrors a famous quote. It is was it is.
Date: 10/30/2013 7:52:00 PM
wow!!!! So many shades of light... Roger, i found myself drawn right into the mirror. soup mail....LINDA
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Roger Horsch
Date: 10/31/2013 8:16:00 AM
I wrote this poem while looking at the painting called " The Lady of Shalott " by John William Waterhouse If you Google this painting and look at it at the same time you are reading my poem. They will both fit together like a glove. Roger
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Date: 10/31/2013 8:08:00 AM
Linda, you are too kind. I thought that I would try to write in a different style. This was my first time writing a poem like this. I hope that I did it right. I can't wait until I hear from you again. Roger
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