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amidst bitter winds the aging owl croons deeply of gentle spring tunes ............ Contest: Traditional Haiku # 2 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 7/2/2015

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Grace Mutindi

Date: 7/6/2015 3:24:00 AM

Beautiful...Congratulations Nette!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/2/2015 11:26:00 PM

Whoooooooo wouldn't love this Haiku, nette? Lovely. Well done. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2015 10:34:00 PM

Nette,I am seeing so many wonderful haiku on this winner list. YOURS TOO. Congrats, dearie.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/2/2015 10:26:00 PM

Awesome haiku nette,, congrats on big win!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/2/2015 7:59:00 PM

Sharp image in graceful lines...Congrats, Nettie!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/2/2015 7:07:00 PM

This was my favorite! Congrats

Constance La France

Date: 7/2/2015 6:13:00 PM

nette, congratulations on your win in Shadows contest with this beauty

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2015 6:11:00 PM

Nice write, Nette , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2015 6:02:00 PM

lovely Nette congrats on 4th place hugs

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2015 5:57:00 PM

Nette, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Tim Smith

Date: 7/2/2015 5:48:00 PM

This is terrific nette....I can hear the wise old owl

Ashley Conte

Date: 7/2/2015 2:20:00 PM

Sweet twist in the last line. Excellent haiku. Magic, magic !

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2015 12:35:00 PM

Even an owl is capable of having sweet memories! In old age they tend to become more important to hold on to. Love the imagery in the initial two lines. I find 'tunes of gentle spring' a fitting conclusion. gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/2/2015 9:53:00 AM

You painted this extremely beautiful and excellent, I like all the lines and how you constructed it..............A.M.

Norma Arana

Date: 7/2/2015 5:03:00 AM

How distinct is the play of contrasting scenes in this tremendous haiku. It's on my mind!