Amid the Mess

you
like lightning
sliced
so frightening
so nice
electric shock
opened lock
crumbling rock
slithering
you slid
settling amid
the mess
you are my sin
i confess
guilty pleasure
heart seizure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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