Amid the Jagged Shadows

"Amid the jagged shadows of mossy leafless boughs; " 

                                           Samuel Taylor Coleridge

perhaps
in your eyes
i was never 
the better part 
of you
maybe
that's why
i always 
let you
get the better
of me

it's like a game
when push comes
to shove
you always
win

i hear
the echoes
of your voice
raining down
on me
through 
the umbrage 
of time

i shiver
naked
like a sprig
on a leafless tree
in winter's breath

that harsh wind
of jagged memories
cuts through me
as my roots
remain twisted
in the mossy shallow
of your grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 3:02 AM
A very deserving win with this memorable poem Sandra. Congratulations on your First placement! Blessings xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your top placement. Love the way you used the metaphor of the tree and end of the poem.
La France Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Sandra congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful poem!
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much for your kind reply, for the placement and for always hosting these wonderful contests... hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:46 PM
- Congratulations so much on your beautiful winning poem, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 3:42 AM
This is one of my favorites entries in this contest Sandra. So happy to see it in first place! Congratulations!. xxoo
Adams Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thank you my sweet friend for your kind words. Hugs XoXo
Na Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Sandra
Adams Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Thank you Greg :) hugs
Kauffman Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Hi Sandra! Congratulations on your win with this poem of simple, yet eloquent, images that beautifully convey your message.
Adams Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much Sam :)
Green Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Congratulation my friend for your top win in this contest. Your poem was amazing and so deserving. Bravo my friend.
Adams Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so much Chris...you are too kind but appreciated my friend... hugs
Chiri Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Sandy beautiful win my friend congratulations!;)
Adams Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 12:30 AM
Wow Sandra, this is awe inspiring! I loved your impactful ending which was perfect. I think this will do really well in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving! : ) xxoo
Adams Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Thank you so much my sweet friend... :) XoXo hugs
There Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Powerfully penned, Sandra ~ a fave.
There Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:40 PM
Happy Thanksgiving to you, too, Sandra :) hugs
Adams Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Hello There... Happy Thanksgiving and thank you so much for your kind visit and the honor of a fave :) hugs
Y. Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 9:40 AM
WoW! Sandra, What a sad yet well written piece about a dysfunctional relationship. We "all" have been there. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day- Alexis
Adams Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 9:44 AM
thank you so much Alexis....i know most can relate... have yourself a wonderful day as well... hugs
Green Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 9:36 AM
Wow, and to think I entered this contest hoping to win, that has just flown out the window. :) Deeply touching and affecting my friend. This poem is laced with tears falling in between old wounds from what I read. A sad heart definitely fueled this amazing poem. Best wishes in the contest though this is a winner to me.
Adams Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you for your vote of confidence my dear friend but yours is gorgeous and sure to win...mine was just some old memories wanting to be penned that seemed to fall within the theme...i will be happy to stand below you on any podium, your poetry always shines.... hugs
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