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Amid Falling Leaves

One cool afternoon,to crack silence and boredom~ Hustling wind allured the tree to perform a belly dance for his rhythm.As he swished heavily.. song evaporated from his giant mouth.Doused by his breath she shivered and instantly fell crazy for his tune ;began twisting & turning her trunk and jiggled her branches.Engrossed shiny leaves too enjoyed entertainment by bouncing it's fragile body up-down, left and right.Sensing the heat, he sung with long deep breaths.Ripe leaves lost grip and started plummeting one by one below...On the ground kept nodding @ @ and marching @ the fat red ant colony without @ worries,tossing @ cubes of grain on their back @ to safely store @ for their winter days.. Amid falling leaves, being stable they steadily concerted on their task without a pause. 27-7-2020 Third Place in the contest. Note:Pick-A-Title, Vol 20 - Free Verse 3 - Poetry Contest Title chosen 1. Amid falling leaves. Sponsored by Edward Ibeh.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/5/2020 5:42:00 AM

Excellent creative depiction, Deepa... Congrats on your win.

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 7:28:00 AM

Hello Vijay sir, Thanks a bunch for your lovely wishes & appreciations always.:-) Feel honoured to be amongst you all.:-)Take care.Warmest regards sent to you:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2020 3:23:00 PM

So glad to see this on the winner list, V. Congratulations!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 7:26:00 AM

Thanks for your double visits and appreciations dear Andrea mam:-) Take care.Much love:-)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/4/2020 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Deepa:-) Well-done on the tree shape!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 7:24:00 AM

Thankyou Edward sir, for your kind appreciation and the placement too.Glad to know that finally one of my muse won your heart.:-) Am pleased to know that you liked it's shape.:-) I loved all your beautiful titles in the contests.Keep inspiring as a sponsor as well as a writer:-)Take care.Warmest regards sent to you~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/4/2020 12:32:00 PM

Wow Deepa! This is not just a soothing poem but also an example of brilliant creativity. I love how each turn in that shape leads to layers in your tale. Congratulations on your win! :) Much love

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 7:20:00 AM

Oh Aditi mam, thanks a lot for your lovely appreciations always.I am please to know that you loved my creative work and the tale:-) Take care.Much love sent to you:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/4/2020 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love your tree picture of words. How long did that take???? A wonderful write. So Cute. Enjoy your win and day..............

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 7:17:00 AM

Hello Paula mam, Thankyou for the lovely appreciation.Glad that you enjoyed my poem and shape.:-) I use my mobile phone.So I took merely 10 min to arrange the words :-) Take care.Much love. Enjoy your day too.......

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2020 5:04:00 PM

this was SO interesting and lovely the way you formed the picture of the tree. Very creative work. You were making it so sensual, i was surprised you brought in the ants!

V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 3:14:00 AM

Hello Andrea mam, Thanks a lot for investing your time to glance at my works:-):-) I am very much pleased to read your lovely words of appreciation. And also glad to hear that you were surprised by the ants:-D Have a blessed day.:-)Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/27/2020 11:52:00 AM

Hello Deepa, oh! you have done a great jpb with this poem. A lovely shape of a tree and leaves. Enjoy your day my friend.Much love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2020 9:36:00 AM

Hello Deepa, you did a great job on this poem. Enjoy your day Much love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 7/28/2020 9:25:00 AM

Wow..I am pleased to hear that:-) Glad to know that you enjoyed this work dear Darlene mam.:-) Thankyou.Have a beautiful warm day.Much love:-)