Amethyst Auroras

There's a cloned avatar of the mystical moon 
for dreamers in search of a beaming wave 
amidst alienated alliterations, 
waltzing in zig-zag within my cyborg mind. 

I still find neon lights,
that teleport rhyme-less runes 
to a realm of subtracted sorrow, 
concluding splitting seconds
within divided despair.

Yet, when midnight melancholy multiplies, 
murky minutes turn into jumbled jargon. 
And Venus emanates clusters of sparkling rays,
flipping letters into endless equations 
with amethyst auroras.

So tonight, I'll dance like a flying saucer~
to the magnetic tunes of swirling sapphires, 
cosmically cruising above the cyber 
canvas of accelerated dreams.
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Volumes Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Totally lushous poem ! To read it is to gently savor it, as it tantalizes the senses, and brings the reader to a realm of dedicated magnificence. This is a superb poem my dear Empress. Congrats on your win. Best wishes from Wen
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:07 AM
I loved the analogies dear Inky, and can imagine your inspiration coming from the pristine shores of your island - I would dance with you too in your dance in space like you so aptly described .. 'So tonight, I'll dance like a flying saucer~ to the magnetic tunes of swirling sapphires, cosmically cruising above the cyber canvas of accelerated dreams'. Congrats on your placement. Hugs
Empress Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Awwn id like to have you dance with me . Its an honor to have your poetic presence
Herrick Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Love the poem and the end was a destiny for it. Brilliant.
Empress Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thank you so very much dear jude
Miller Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 3:01 AM
Just excellent, great entry for the competition, congratulations on your well-deserved placement.
Empress Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thank you so very much truly , grateful for your generous support
Greenhough Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:31 PM
In a galaxy far, far away, a sensational poem was written. Personification of a cyborg was genius
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:17 AM
Awn thank you always sweet hilda i appreciate your support
Narayann  Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Reading you after such a long time! My apologies, dear. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your prowess in employing the literary devices, while crafting a tale that transports us into such magical realms is truly spellbinding!
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Ah thank you its ok you didnt miss anything special island sunshine lol same old. Appreciate ur interest though and visit truly
Rodgers Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Dear Ink Empress, What a mesmerizing voyage through the celestial realms of imagination and emotion. Your words are of a cosmic beauty, where neon lights and midnight melancholy collide in a plethora of swirling sapphires and sparkling rays. You words conjure evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment, transporting me to a world where dreams and reality intertwine seamlessly. Great poetic prowess and igniting our imaginations with your celestial dance. Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Dear Daniel, your comments are so profound and can tell you are a deep reader, thank you so much truly. Appreciate always your support
Hind Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:16 PM
I love the alliteration without, felt like I was a saucer floating on next to you. And it's a message of hope and dreams- love it!
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Awwn thank you dear paige always you are truly a gem
Achara Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Science Fiction Poetry Contest. Your poem was simply a pleasure to read. Chetta
Empress Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:14 PM
Thank you so much. Truly Honored as its my first time trying this. Sending you light always
Anaya Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 1:50 PM
"So tonight, I'll dance like a flying saucer~ to the magnetic tunes of swirling sapphires, cosmically cruising above the cyber canvas of accelerated dreams" Sounds dreamy, love it! Congratulations on your win, Ink! :D (You're an inventor) genius!
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Ahhh that means alot coming from you, this was a very quick write i did last minute as the contest was closing. Im so grateful for your poetic support and presence sweet soul. Sending you light always.
Rose  Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:46 PM
returning with a big Congrats dear
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:28 AM
Ah thank you sweet rose
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:20 PM
Clever and fun. Congrats on your win.
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:42 AM
Thank you so much congrats on your trophy win too
Gentile Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Your poetic gifts are always evident and none moreso than in this imaginitive experience in the skies! Beautiful!
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:42 AM
Thank you so much that is such a kind thing to say. Grateful for your support
Poet Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Dear Ink, your storytelling is a testament to your exceptional creativity and poetic prowess. It transports the mind to a world of mystical enchantment, liberating it from the banality of everyday life while remaining rooted in the world around us. Your imagination and creativity are truly awe-inspiring. I yearn to witness a confrontation between Mars and Venus, a concept that is both ingenious and unprecedented. Good luck with the contest
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:43 AM
Ah thank you so very much dr sotto i appreciate your poetic presence always truly
Buhagiar Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 9:38 AM
I love Sci-Fi. Great alliteration. Wish I could see a fight between Mars and Venus. Clever and original.
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 1:56 AM
Thank you so very much. Yes they say men are from mars women from venus so maybe they do fight? Youv left me thinking. Appreciate your support always
Parker Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 9:13 AM
imagination and creativity is a realm that the mind will elope with, to free itself from the mundane and yet never leave the world that surrounds...your imagination and creativity are a beautiful thing to see...
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:19 AM
Thank you so very much frederick thats so kind of you to say, I admire your poetic skills too
Beaufort Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:51 AM
I do like how you can travel so far just in your imagination. I believe that dreaming and going wherever it takes you is a very creative exercise for those lucky enough to harness those parts of our mind. There are all kinds of levels and places to explore and something to be experienced from each one. Perhaps messages as well. Taking that and applying it to daily life is interesting. You've done it with poetry, which I read as an example of a suggested vacation that costs nothing.
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:27 AM
What a thoughtful and profound comment this is dear duke thank you so very much for your kind and detailed feedback and for leaving your thoughts here. So deep. I am grateful for your kind support always
One Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Oh Inky so nice to see something different from you in regards to storytelling.. I know its easy for you as you are out of this world yourself, your sci-fi narrative is a mesmerizing blend of mysticism and futuristic imagery. The portrayal of a cloned avatar of the mystical moon and the interplay of alienated alliterations within a cyborg mind create a landscape where the boundaries between reality and imagination blur.
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:28 AM
What a brilliant and profound comment this is shows your understanding of my poem really, left me feeling understood and head . Thank you so much silent one for always encouraging me and for being so supportive truly grateful
One Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:41 AM
The use of neon lights and teleportation of rhyme-less runes adds a layer of enigma to the setting, drawing the reader into a realm where sorrow is subtracted and divided despair finds conclusion in splitting seconds. The imagery of midnight melancholy multiplying into jumbled jargon and Venus emanating sparkling rays that flip letters into endless equations is both haunting and captivating. It conjures a sense of cosmic mystery and infinite possibilities. The finale, with the protagonist dancing like a flying saucer to the magnetic tunes of swirling sapphires above the cyber canvas of accelerated dreams, symbolizes a liberation from earthly constraints and a transcendence into a realm where imagination knows no bounds.
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Your words bring to fore the splendor of images, my friend: --And Venus emanates clusters of sparkling rays, flipping letters into endless equations with amethyst auroras-- much enjoyed this cosmic cruising. You always paint your canvas brilliantly, Ink.
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:29 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vijay. I am always grateful for your kind support truly
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Yes, I get those rhymeless tunes/lines flowing through my mind during the night keeping me awake. Creative work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with me and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Empress Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:40 AM
Thank you so much always sara
Rose  Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 3:46 AM
So tonight, I'll dance like a flying saucer~ Oh how I wish I could do that dear friend, what a view I'd have and you, you can come too :)
Empress Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Your comment made me smile. Haha maybe like belly dancers, we dance. Thank you sweet rose
Onpaper Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 3:20 AM
Oooo a sci-fi vibe … not a genre we get to see a lot from your page aee .. n even then u blowing my imaginations out!!! waltzing in zig-zag within my cyborg mind… aaaa I am also a little zigzag aeee… XD.. that teleport rhyme-less runes to a realm of subtracted sorrow, concluding splitting seconds within divided despair…. Mmmm those lines!!! Venus emanates clusters of sparkling rays, mm imagery!! U r the cluster of sparkling rays aee!! magnetic tunes of swirling sapphires,.. absolutely stunning weave
Rhymes Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 3:16 AM
I love the last stanza . It’s so nice .
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