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American Toys

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             An  American van
                   and band
                   and sand

             An American Girl

                   and boy

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Elizabeth Wesley

September 17, 2011 at 9:41 AM

AND JOY - Sweet and tightly told. It was true in my day as I guess it is now. Brings back memories James. Lovely!

Debbie Guzzi

July 10, 2011 at 2:54 PM

soft smile...ahh the good old days and snuggling in the back of oh so hot vans! Light & Love

James Foulk

July 1, 2011 at 12:24 PM

thank you for commenting on The Silence of a Falling Star.

Andrea Dietrich

June 27, 2011 at 8:05 PM

seeing this one again. I really like it!

Poet Destroyer A

June 12, 2011 at 4:18 PM

wow! quick and very swift... lets all go to the beach... very cute... enjoyed,..p.d.

Phyllis Babcock

June 11, 2011 at 9:24 AM

PURE American style fun with the band, sand and van not to mention the guy and girl. Cute poem few words but conveys a lot. love phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

June 10, 2011 at 2:59 PM

A delightful recollection you bring to mind. I remember the days when all the boys had vans and ogled the girls in their bikinis on the beach, James. Have not been well, but have an MRI scheduled for next week. Hope you'll read a poem posted more than a week ago because you are mentioned in it: "Gathering of the Golden Girls." Love you, sweetie Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield

June 9, 2011 at 3:36 AM

MADE IN THE U.S.A :),SMILES!

James Foulk

June 8, 2011 at 9:59 AM

very creative piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Little Blue Eyes.

Daver Austin

June 8, 2011 at 9:50 AM

At the good old county fair. Hey! You be beeg patriot, no? Seriously, this is a great musing. LOve, daver

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2011 at 9:16 PM

All american fun in the SUN, I SAY! Coolio, James.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2011 at 8:40 PM

American all the way James... luv the setting ..first the van then the band and sand and girl and boy..works for me luv.. wonderfully patriotic and romantic too..