American Freedom, the New World's Blessings

People emigrated from many shores
To a New World that had no closed doors
American culture’s diversity
Thank God we live in the land of the free

Asians, Africans, Europeans too
Many nationalities did accrue
Leaving behind countries with tyranny
Thank God we live in the land of the free

Troubles erupted among many clans
And yet now in peace we stand holding hands
A rainbow of blessings, God’s artistry
Thank God we live in the land of the free

This blend adds richness to the melting pot
Thankful for all the liberty we’ve got
Each has a place in our society
Thank God we live in the land of the free

Discrimination sinks into the past
Knowing that our strong bonds are sure to last
America says, “Welcome” to you and me
God’s blessings found in the land of the free



*Entry for Dane Ann's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/17/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win Carolyn. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/16/2011 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn on your first place win in my contest. What a pleasant surprise for me to see that one of my dearest friends won first place in a contest that I juged blind! Double joy! Great poem! Love you. Very Happy for You, Dane Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2011 1:46:00 PM
Love your use of this form for the topic! and showing our dream! Congrad's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2011 8:58:00 AM
Hooray for you Carolyn! I had forgotten about this contest, and now I can see why Dane Ann chose this wonderful poem a winner!! Congratulations on a 'welcoming' inspirational poem!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2011 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win Carolyn. A great poem. I was surprised to find this contest result this morning. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2011 8:38:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, This flows so swell.. u make writing a krielle look so easy....Makes me want to go and try to write my first one...I am glad my ancestors immigrated to this great country...we are sooooo blessed. Congrats deary. Congrats. Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/6/2011 10:28:00 AM
a great piece of creative poetry, a wonderful write about our wonderful country, even with our pitfalls, which our many, we still have our freedom.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2011 9:10:00 AM
This is a very patriotic poem. We indeed live in the land of the free and the home of the brave. Many people just don't realize it. They just have to read the news and look around. The grass is not always greener on the other side. Have a great week and thanks for your many comments. Take care and God bless, Jancarl
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2011 6:59:00 AM
Lovely patriotic write, my friend. I don't think I could write anything like that about England... Hope you're having a great day - and plenty of r&r after your voyage. Hope you get the go ahead to have your scans - I guess the NHS is the one thing England still has going for it. Have a great weekend - and enjoy your fish : )
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2011 12:51:00 PM
A great entry as always Carolyn. I see you must be home. hope you got your allotted no. of fish. I am pleased as can be to be one of the first prize winners in your contest. Thanks loads. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/2/2011 12:30:00 PM
I don't think people appreciate this country till they go to another country and find life much harder in that other country. Hope you are having fun wherever you are dear Carolyn. LOve, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2011 7:45:00 AM
Hey CD! This one is a good Thank you note to our all the people INCLUDING the Indians, who make this a great place to live. We can do better, but we should be grateful. I hope your fishing trip was sAWESOME! I wrote a poem for God. Are you shocked? Also, I posted a few new ones. I think you will like the one about Equal Rights, as well as a few others. ~Joey
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2011 3:20:00 PM
Providence brought all nations together. in a land where all can be better. time has matured us into what we were to be a leader among nations. a place to flee.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2011 10:32:00 AM
Very creative write here Carolyn....Best wishes..
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 10:03:00 PM
It fits the topic perfectly, Carolyn!! Have you begun any fishing yet?? I bet you will be peeking on here in no time. LUv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 2:59:00 PM
This is a wonderful tribute to your country. It's beautiful. I wish you best in the contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 1:26:00 PM
Lovely expressions on the national pride, carolyn, Good luck in the contest,
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 1:17:00 PM
I like your patriotic and hopeful poem. America is glad to have wonderful poets like you in it! ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 1:08:00 PM
Wonderfullly penned. Much enjoyed.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2011 12:39:00 PM
Dane Ann will love this uplifting piece, Carolyn! Rich in love for the land of the home and the brave! Lovely!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter